All Comments on 'Old Broad on a Train'

I really like the beginning of this story and if it weren't for some inconsistancies (planes travel at least six times faster that trains and the frequent stops would make the trip last even longer, say thirty to sixty hours as opposed to six) and an all too short discription of the young buck eating out the old lady I would have given this story the maximum "100". Still, it's a good start and although few will be reading either the story or my comment it had to be said.

Nice story but it would NOT have happened. Amtrack DOES NOT put another passenger in a sleeping car compartment with you unless it's made at the initial reservation. So Betty would NOT have ended up sharing a room with him.

Other than that, I hope her fucks the hell out of her and get a Part 2.

Good story.