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Critical comments should be understandable
In reference to the previous poster: Please understand that some readers here are functionally illiterate and therefore should not be critical of those who can and do share their fantasies with others. I can assure you that there are more who appreciate your labor than are critical. Perhaps it is the only outlet for their twisted, angry self loathing. At any rate, I enjoy a little twist to the usual story line, thanks!
Not a stroke story but a rape story
Why not lable it for what it is??
decent enough I suppose
Average writing with some grammatical errors that mar the final copy. Insofar as the stroke quality goes, it's decent but I've read better. Its appeal is narrow, limited mostly to those who get off on rape, humiliation and domination. There's no love in this story and certainly no romance. The oversized tits and cock don't particularly add anything to the story's pizzaz since every "stroker" puts them into their stories.
Feels like a 50 to me.
Wait till he's asleep
Sure the big turd thinks domination works but in the real, Lorena Bobbitt world once the fucker is asleep she would slit his throat from ear to ear, then she would hurt him. In short don't waste my time calling this stroke its a crude rape fantasy, and personally rapists should be casstrated and humiliated in like manner, please don't write anymore like this. you sick fuck.
This is a stroke story?
Skip:
Your subheading for me is an oxymoron: "A home invasion stroke story." My honest opinion? I didn't like it. I have to agree with some comments previously posted: this is a story of forced sexual intimacy, which amounts to rape. I did appreciate your preamble. There was no character development. For me reading your story was like watching someone paint his house purple. It would make me wonder what was going on in his mind.
Oh, and I hope I was literate enough for the pompous dickwad who posted earlier comments. The remarks to which he referred have been deleted. Apparently he is quite familiar with having an outlet for something twisted. His assurance of how many appreciated your story is as inflated as his ego.
Here we go@
the worst part about this story is just the fact that I read this shit!!!! licking shit is beyond perverse. anal is cool but you don't lick shit unless you are fuckin' sick!!! WEAK ASS STORY!!!!!!
not the proper category! Definitely NOT a stroke I
Not properly labeled. It is either a BDSM, Fetish or Nonconsent. I Did not like it. It is poorly composed, and poorly edited. You should go over it after you write & see what a poor job you did & then correct it.
This author......
seriously has something fucked up in his head! Every story on here is worthless trash just like the women he writes about! That's the last time I click on a Skip1934a story! You should warn people when you're going to write about rape as some of us have known someone who had their entire lives ruined because of it! You are a very sick fuck Skip! I hope that's what you're going for!?!?
This story is like a premature ejaculation.
This story went from 0 to 60 back to 0 without any build up or plot and the storyline is weak at best. It's like a premature ejaculation a quick rub, a splash of words with no substance and no one gets any pleasure. Also only a creep would think a story about a big black man beating and taking advantage of a woman of any interest. Get better story ideas, build up the characters, create interesting interactions and put more effort into giving the reader pleasure. Stop the premature ejaculations or at least keep them to yourself.
"credited?"
You want credit where none is due. This is a sick story, not a stroke story.
PURE PUKE STORY, HAVE A BUCKET OF IT
UNO ESTRELLA
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