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hmmm
Your story has potential, I can feel it lurking beneath the surface. But, it's missing something. I can't put my finger on it, but keep up the good work and hopefully you'll find it as it progresses. :)
Sweet story!
A black girl and white guy are irresistably attracted to each other. Written with good tastes and believable dialogue. Enjoyable Read! Good Write!
I like it so far
I can't wait to read more.
Good Chapter
I didn't even realize that you had updated. I feel like such a bad fan.
I really liked this chapter. Darnell is a good friend. I hope that Alliyah and Alexander fall in love. Their names just go together so perfect. You are a good writer. I can't wait to read more of this story.
KC
Keep It Up
Keep up the good work.
I'm interested in seeing where the realtionship is going to end up.
where is the rest of it?
so far i love it and cant wait for the next chapters!!
WOW
Wonderfully written
I'm a black girl from Canada, and I just LOVE this story
*****
Editing needed, but very nice overall. A lot of potential.
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