All Comments on 'Ema Applies for a New Job Ch. 04'

by SimonC

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Is there a chapter missing?

Chapter 3 ended with Ema wanting to go home, chapter 4 starts with her entering a house, which is not her home, with two men, of whom the reader never had heard before ...

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Just plain plain

Nothing really stirring or exciting. Just some so-so sexuality in a confused story that seems to have no connection with the past.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Thank you - i was confused

What happened did you miss a chapter i was confused

vegasmyhomevegasmyhomeabout 17 years ago
miss lee

miss lee great nasty secretary

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago

You really need to proof read. Half of it didn't make sense and you're grammar was awful. Also try and put some more description in.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
nice

good 4 some1 needing 2 jack off

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

A little connection to the Story is missing and no real end.

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