by SimonC
Chapter 3 ended with Ema wanting to go home, chapter 4 starts with her entering a house, which is not her home, with two men, of whom the reader never had heard before ...
Nothing really stirring or exciting. Just some so-so sexuality in a confused story that seems to have no connection with the past.
What happened did you miss a chapter i was confused
You really need to proof read. Half of it didn't make sense and you're grammar was awful. Also try and put some more description in.