All Comments on 'Daughter Sarah the Deep Sleeper'

by Amyfriend

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Why?

Why do you feel the need to capitalize cum? I mean, readers are here to enjoy good stories and when you get to a word that stands out so much it really destracts you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
HOT... HOT... HOT

It reminds me very much of one of my earlier encounters with my daddy and I loved to have him cum over my bald pussy. There's something special about having Daddy's cum all over your body....YUMMY STORY

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Really Hot, Hot, Hot

From the title I was expecting something very different from what you wrote. You are getting better with each story and I look forward to your next submission Amy. HOTTTTTTTTT

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Agreed

Great hot story, but the capitalizing of "cum" is just a distraction and annoying.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
HOT HOT WET

This was truly the hottest one I have read of your stories, but all are well written........just keep submitting more.......enjoyed all of them......mrcom

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Detail

I really like how you described her nightgown in detail. It really helps you feel like you are there.

But I agree having cum in caps was a little distracting.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Grrrr

Greatttttt; cumming on her cunt is a fantasy of mine

jer14jer14over 17 years ago
loved it

I hope you go on with this storyline, I love all of stories. This one was downloaded and saved!!!

walkingeaglewalkingeagleover 17 years ago
Amyfriend always tells a super erotic story!

Amyfriend has writen another very sensuous super erotic story!She always arouses---

Great job!

walkingeaglewalkingeagleover 17 years ago
Amyfriend always tells a super erotic story!

Amyfriend has writen another very sensuous super erotic story!She always arouses---

Great job!

Sapphire_OSapphire_Oabout 17 years ago
Fantastic fantasy

Wow! You are a great writer. I loved your vivid descriptions of Sarah. Thanks!

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
Deep in a Dream.

What a beautiful intimate glimpse of a forbidden affair that is both lustful and at the same time endearing and lovely. Amy, you are indeed an excellent writer. I so enjoyed this story!

colonelmeerkatcolonelmeerkatover 16 years ago
:S

Well I expected something different from the title, but I still enjoyed it. But why on earth did you capitalise cum every time? Very distracting - actually stopped me from coming myself.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Not such a deep sleeper

Guess she wasn't such a deep sleeper. Otherwise dad would have felt her up. sucked her nipples, Fingered his sleeping beauty. finally fucked his object of desire, Leaving a big load of daddy cum in her nicely trimmed cunt.

I wish I was there with her. But thats another story

good story.

Waiting to cum.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Yeah Amy, cum on pussy and then fingering herself to orgasm with daddy's warm pool of semen is so hot. Loved the story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
me too

If the story is true, love and lust.

Do any of your girl friends fantasize about taboo sex like this?

I enjoy spying on my daughter and watching her free her breasts in the 34 DDD bra cup lusty bra. I love to jerk off and cum in the cups. It then dries, and she wears my dry cum.

More fetish talk later Sarah.

Your lusty pirate.

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