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Blonde Fucks Blacks Ch. 03

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/01/06

Yet another lack lustre effort from you

Look for help in your writing. It might help you be a better amateur writer.

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by Anonymous08/12/07

Horrible

There is no mention of the original character 'Alice.' So it's wrong to bill this as a continuation of the irish woman's story. It's all narrated and that makes it even worse.

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by Anonymous11/19/07

hated the style

I loved the idea, the sequence, the plot, hated the writing style, I gave you a afive, in hopes you will go get some help in making it better

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by Anonymous09/06/09

Needs work

You are trapped in a very specific set of fetishes. Try to write something that is outside of your comfort range and perhaps you would improve.

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