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zfammezfammealmost 16 years ago
nice

i like the way he was jealous & they were both faithful to each other. he really loves her :D

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
nice story

some people may be mad at me but i think it is beautiful that a brother and sister can be so in love with each other. i see nothing wrong with the love they share and induldge in ,so long as it is what THEY WANT.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
I agree

hey anonymous I actually agree with you. If they both want it and they know what they're up against and still wanna go through with it then by all means it's their life. There are more pressing issues in the world to nit pick at then to do over how siblings live their lives. It truly is a beautiful thing that brother and sister can have that close of a bond.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Love it

Love the story so far, only thing that i would change is I would leave the mom out of it, It makes the story unrealistic when his mom is checking him out, and getting hot over him, it's just kinda a turn off for me,

I was fine with him drooling over his moms looks, becasue it shows his personality, but when his mom starts getting horny over him, it becomes unrealistic

BilardinoBilardinoover 5 years ago
Lovely stories

Would really like to read more about Jim and Ashley.

OldUncleAlOldUncleAlover 2 years ago

I know it is a sex story but I STILL think he’s being way too forward . She told him she didn’t want to do it when she has her friend with her. If he cares about HER and not merely her pussy, then he should accept it and shut up! I mean he is getting me pissed off and I am not=even involved.

Every paragraph starts or ends with I want to fuck Ash,”. Really? I think even the ink knows it, so knock it off.

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