While the story itself has good premise, i realised as i read it that english is not your native language, Some help from an english speaking editor might be of help with your grammar
Learn some. Please. I had to stop reading because of it.
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While the story itself has good premise, i realised as i read it that english is not your native language,
Some help from an english speaking editor might be of help with your grammar
Grammar...
Learn some. Please. I had to stop reading because of it.
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to The Agency Ch. 01 or
More submissions by uvlas45.