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A Lesson for a Fat Bad-Girl Wife

byJustinNickThyme©
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by Anonymous

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by asiaprof11/04/06

Ugh!

Tons of Typos, Poor Language
Linear plot, 2D Characters
Lukewarm Sex, Too Rapidfore
And factually incorrect too
5'8", 160 lbs is never fat -
Especially not with such curves!
Among the worst I've read here.

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by Anonymous07/21/09

I agree

Woman with 5'8" and 160 lbs ain't bbw. She should be something like 5'8" and 280 lbs.

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by Anonymous05/14/10

Colliqualism

To be frankly honest, I had to stop reading the story half-way. This story was more of a self reflection of dogmatic perception society has on minority groups, also, it did not maintain any chracterisation or storyline.

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by Anonymous10/27/11

You're an idiot

160 pounds on 5"8 would barely make her fat.

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by Bridget6904/15/13

A lesson for a bad writer...

who doesn't know the difference between being curvy and being fat.

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by Anonymous05/28/13

Holy shit.

This is abuse. Awful writer-- just horrible. Jesus, learn how to write. And, do us a favour, learn the difference between abuse and submission. Because this is plain and simple abuse.
And females read things on this site too, you prick.

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