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Lust in the Backseat

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by Amyfriend11/02/06

Love your story

It was cute, it was sexy, it was daring.

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by sexmate11/02/06

Oh Yea! It's good!

Hot! This one got the mind working!
Thanks for writing.
Sexmate

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by Anonymous11/03/06

VERY VERY GOOD

Such a nice and profilic writing. Definitely very HOT! Keep up the excellent writings........mrcom

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by Anonymous11/03/06

Good premisw

But the sex is too wham-bam-thank-you-ma'am. Needs more buildup, needs foreplay, needs to be longer.

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by Anonymous11/03/06

What happens next?

I agree that everything happened WAY too quickly. These two ought to be able to spend more time with each other. Here's a couple suggestions:

1) Mom decides she wants to get some "proper" breakfast in the morning while Dad and Daughter decide that a "continental" breakfast consisting of doughnuts and coffee is fine. So Mom leaves in a huff for a few hours of eating out (ostensibly to teach them some sort of weird lesson about not joining her for breakfast). Meanwhile, Dad and Daughter fuck each other senseless and order in some bacon and eggs from the hotel front desk. :)

2) Mom wakes up early and decides to scope out the local area for good places to eat. On the way, she succumbs to road rage and ends up dying in a totally unnecessary car wreck. Dad and Daughter take stock and realize they didn't like the bitch anyway and fuck themselves senseless in the hotel room while the insurance company acquires a new car for them.

3) The trio make it to the Brother/Son's school without delay or trouble. When they get there, they decide to surprise him and end up catching him fucking his girlfriend (who looks a LOT like Mom). They all see Son/Brother's equipment and Mom starts to soften up a little....

Lots of ideas where this could go! Have fun and don't disappoint us with some more torrid tales of this potentially hot family!

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by Will Wanton 6911/04/06

Good stuff

Unlike earlier commenters, i think the story is not too fast at all. You have to look at the logic of it. Father and daughter had foreplay in the backseat, and knew then that they wanted to fuck. The first, and possibly only occasion for a long time to fuck was when the mother was taking a shower. Who knows when they would next get the chance, and father and daughter wanted each other way too much to wait God knows how long for the next opportunity.
Knowing that mother might soon be done showering, they had to make do with the limited time they had and fucked fast, hard and passionately.

Within the logic of the events in the story, what happened is perfect.

P.S. I'm sure that with the next opportunity they have, dad will have the time, and common decency to eat his girl out just like she blew him in the car, to return the favor.

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by WickedDrX11/06/06

great story, too darn short.

Pretty darn well written. You got a lot of story into a short space. Well done. Quite erotic.

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by Anonymous01/15/07

Get Mom involved.

Good start, but way too short. Mom could have walked in on them while they fucked and decided that that was just the thing that would make the marriage better.

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by SmallFry04/18/07

Sweet But Short

I agree with the others about it being Hot and a little too short. When are you going to write the finish to it.

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by Anonymous05/03/07

Purr-fect

Just the right length, subject, and wording. I would not change a thing.

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by hotpup05/04/07

Great Job!

Very erotic and sexy. The story flowed well. Story length should be whatever you are comfortable with. Keep it up and you'll keep me hard

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by larrydownunder05/22/07

SO HOTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT

What a great story. Loved the build up and very erotic . Had me hard. The thought of them doing it with the wife so close in the shoer was great turn on and had me cumming. Keep up the great work

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by Anonymous05/29/07

eXcellent

Purrfect. Just keep writing them like this one!

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by Anonymous07/22/07

Sequel please!

This was fantastic! Very hot. You've got the makings for a series if you give it just a little more character development.

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by Anonymous08/05/07

sweet

wonderful storyline, simple but solid.
good stuff!!!

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by Anonymous09/11/07

Excellent story

This is an excellent story. I enjoyed reading it and I enjoyed stroking my hard cock while I read it. Your story really got me sexually aroused and I had a great time jacking off. You have a great talent for making your male readers cum. Thank you for the pure pleasure. I had a wonderful ejaculation.

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by Anonymous09/29/07

FANTASTIC

Really well written story(ies). You have a lot of talent. Keep Writing! Your style express your inner passion; I love it. Was registered long ago as joto. Not there any more.

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by Anonymous12/24/07

Felt Great

You are a beautiful woman and you wrote a beautiful story. The daughter sucking her father off in the back seat while her mother was driving the car was so fine. Then, father and daughter fucking while the mother is in the shower was even hotter. It felt great. I'll save the story in favorites and jack off some more later. Thank you for the pleasure you gave me. Please write more.

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by Anonymous12/28/07

Beautiful, sexy, story. My pussy was dripping!!!

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by mikej235806/04/08

So Good

That had my cock so hard, especially the part where she was sucking her father's cock in the backseat of the car while mom drove, damn I wish that was me

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by Anonymous07/10/08

Still Jacking Off

This was a great story. I love the thought of incest. My dream is for my family to have an orgy. I think you should write another where the mother catches them and decides to join in! That would be cum blowing!!

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by jp_north07/18/08

Lusting for Emma

You have a wonderful erotic mind....more please

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by Anonymous11/25/08

OMFG AWESOME!!!!

Wow i must say ive been to this site and seen this a couple tims but never thought about reading it until today.

Very Well Written so Bravo on your writing skills. Be very proud of this and keep the stories going strong.

Yours Truly,
Caring Anonymous Reader

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by bigtrojan8312/19/08

Hot as they come

I could definitely see this happening! Great detail. I most liked the part in the car; I wanted so much to be Rick! Having his daughters mouth going down on him when they could both be caught sent me over the edge.

You are a VERY talented writer!

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by terrivonlott02/21/09

Beautiful setup

I, like many others loved the car scene. I have been there many times and it is so much fun...if you don't get caught! Bravo!

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by sassysasha8910/03/09

Rock it!

I agree with others that this rocked big time.

Maybe while mom's asleep, she climbs into bed and fucks daddy with her mom sleeping beside them. How about the mom was tired and decided to rest alongside the road in the car? The father and daughter fuck each other in the backseat of the car and then outside on the car hood with the daughter's breasts pressed against the windshield in front of her mother's sleeping face.

I can imagine them getting it on during the whole trip to North Carolina and running and fucking amuck all over North Carolina. Perhaps they can screw each other in the rest stop bathroom or they pull over to pee in the bushes but they take the opportunity to fuck each other again.

This whole trip can be about opportunity because we know they can't get enough of each other now.

Please do write more of this!

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by bigtrojan8305/03/10

Hot Hot Hot !!!

Veeery sexy story! Well worth a 2nd read (or 4th ;) Your kinky little angel can lay her pretty little head in my lap and "nap" anytime ;>

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by sexgal196605/09/10

Daddy

OOOOOOOHHHHHHH love that daddy was that easy....he could slide that big hard cock into me anytime.....keep cumming with more stories

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by RossDaniels01/19/11

Very hot!

The chance of getting caught made the story very sexy. Nicely done.

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by Anonymous01/31/11

good...

the sex behind Sally's back made it more erotic. the base is nicely set up. go on and make a series out of it. later, u can always include the bother as well. Thumbs Up!!!

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by 2275jr04/22/11

fucking his daughter in thr back seat

brilliant story so very hot and very very horny. reading this was like watching a porn film but a whole lot better you do write such beautiful stories. i love them all. thank you. more more please.

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I completely agree with the danger factor.
Not only were the two already committing incest, but they were very liable to get caught at any moment.
Incredibly hot.

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by Anonymous05/10/11

cum

made me want to cum right there and then, i was kind of dissapointed when there was no more please write some more.

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by aprilandrews05/25/11

great story

great story,need follow up chapters,a little to short for such a great story

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by blueyedbob06/10/11

veery, very hot!!

good timing,,sexy story, i was rock hard for as long as it lasted,,the danger factor helped,,,,please,,more chapters!!

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by peebudy08/08/11

thanks

good variation on the sneaking sex on a car ride story, although it's hard to believe that a girl who would blow her sleeping father is a virgin!

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by Anonymous08/11/11

I came to this story with my daddy sleeping in the same room. Thank you very much!

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by Anonymous11/06/11

Love the danger!

Fantastic use of danger to heighten the sexual excitement (both for them and for the readers). I think Peebuddy was right thaT "it's hard to believe that a girl who would blow her sleeping father is a virgin," but at that point in the story we didn't know that. Once when I was in college and returning from Christmas break, my gf gave me a mind-blowing blowjob while I was driving and while another couple (virgins) were asleep in the back seat. Talk about hot! Lucky we didn't wreck.

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by Naughtydad46911/07/11

More please!

Great story and writing...this story needs to continue...2nd time I read it and came just as hard as the first time ;)

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by HotAmy12/19/11

To have a Dad like that

I love these stories, and yours is so good, I kept thinking it was me and my father and got so turned on.

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by Anonymous05/02/12

yum

I love when you write stories like this. Please write more.

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by Anonymous07/01/12

Emma your so fucking hot

Wow loved how naughty this story was, having your tight virgin cunt fucked by your father and the way u describe it was very very erotic xx
Paul from uk
Rigorous1@sky.com

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by curiousnolefan10/27/12

That was an awesome story!! You're a great writer!!

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by wazza4402/22/13

yummy

what a beautiful story. need you to write some more.

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by bigdaddyg12304/03/13

Lust in the Backseat

Mother and wife Sally is the only driver, with her daughter Laura and husband Rick in the backseat sleeping, as they start their long cross country trip. This scenario is just perfect for nature, human urges and instincts, and conveniences to alter the family's lifestyle and sexual pecking-order. Laura, with her adolescent female urges and needs awakening, adores and wants her father. The backseat of the family car, on a long trip, is the perfect place for Laure to ply her "wares" and come to terms with her deep, deep desire for her father to fuck her first, and then she will seduce him to love and make love, with her and to her.

The characters are somewhat different in dialogue and confidence, except for Laura. Mother Sallly is a bitcher, moaner and complainer; Father Rick is level headed, a nice all around guy and doesn't know his daughter is absolutely in awe of him, loves him and needs him. The long-drive cross-country trip is very condusive to "things" happening. The author has expressed the character's demeaner very good. The overall writing is well constructed with some good visual effects. Laura, the daughter is written to express herself in an exciting and exotic urgency.

Of course with the family trip just underway, lots of miles to go, their stay in South Carolina for some period of time, and their return trip back home there is ample opportunity for daughter and father to explore, play, tease, tempt, satisfy, taste and love each other. The results are only in the mind of the author. The anticipation is in the minds of the many readers of this story; we wish and long for more!!

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by beguiled99907/03/13

Love that mom is present

The danger is what makes this hot, though that's come through as well. The fact she's there adds that extra kink.

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by bigdaddyg12308/10/13

"Lust In The Backseat:" - Laura and Rick - (Daughter and Father)

Previously I read this short story about two months ago; I was enamored with it at that time and am more so with my second reading! If this story were to be non-fictional and real I would lead the charge for Rick and his daughter Laura to be awarded medals for their tenacity and aversion to their risk-taking to physically profess and give their totally committed love, and bodies, to each other within mere feet of Rick's wife (Laura's mother) in the backseat of their family car, driving to their son's college graduation!!

Taking risks is very illusive and certainly blood-boiling hypertension; Rick and daughter Laura have such an emotional, physical, and sexually carnal desire for each other--much beyond the sexuality--they proved their worth to each other by taking possibly their greatest risk ever!! Laura was a virgin adolescent willing to give her sexually most-treasured asset to her father is worth more to her father, and even Laura herself, than either will ever imagine, and can never be taken from them!!!

The one short coming of the entire story is there was no mention of birth control--or not!! To me, it means awarding four (4) stars rather than five (5) stars! The story certainly deserved five stars in almost every aspect and category of literary writing, but I was unable to award five stars for the missing possibilty of the pregnancy of Laura. To me five stars is an award for the highest honor--period. That means I award five stars when the ultimate sacrifice of risk is evident and/or consummated (barring the female being either much too old, or due to medical impediment; neither condition seemed to be in play in Laura's and her father's medical and physical situation)!! Otherwise, the story is top-shelf! The writing is very good. The dialogue is excellent, and precise, and easily understandable, even the musing of both Laura and her father Rick. The character's role's are very well played and positioned throughout the story. The theme and plot is not unusual but it was used in an excellent manner! The writer is highly gifted, talented and has abilities that could verge on professionalism!! Keep writing; your work is most certainly appreciated by this avid and appreciative reader!!!!!

This story would make for a great short series of about half a dozen chapters, of two to three pages each!! Rick's wife and Laura's mother Sally's attitudes about her family, her life in general and her opinions of Rick and Laura specifically could take one chapter itself. Sally should NOT be part of the carnal incestual affair of Rick and Laura, other than to divorce Rick if and when she finds out about her husband's and her daughter's love and devotion, respect and honor, caring and adoration for each other!! The story should belong to Rick and his daughter's love for each other--and them ALONE!

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by HornyViginAngel08/29/13

Great start.

Nice beginning.

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by writerjab09/26/13

Would like to see

your thought on one of these bitchy moms realizing her reign is about to come crashing down and she will be the property of Daddy and his hot daughter. "What can you say? No one would believe you they say. It's our word against just you!"

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by Anonymous04/02/14

Best Daughter

Wow! I love to read your story. This is the best sex i have ever seen. I love it very much.

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