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The Play Thing

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by Anonymous04/17/08

Interesting

This was a very interesting story, and quite unusual.

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by Anonymous05/15/08

Emotion-provoking

Lack of detail is made up by the intense emotions expressed within this tale. It leaves alot to the imagination, which is good. Having the characters made up in my mind made me care about them more than if they had been described against my liking.

Keep writing, please!

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