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Albel and Dante Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/03/06

Nice story but..

i couldn't give you a good score because of all the spelling and grammar mistakes. you really need to get your stuff edited. other than that i would have liked to give you 100. please continue with the story

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by duddle14611/04/06

Lovely Story!

The reuniting of two friends told with tenderness and empathy. A quite enjoyable read.

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