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by rgraham66611/12/06

Very good start

I got quite caught up in this. The authour managed to both fill in the narrator's character and past while leaving me wondering what else has happened.

And what will occur in the future.

Very nice work. Well done.

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by rightbank09/22/16

1st chapter sends mixed signals

some hopeful, most not. But it certainly makes the 2nd a must read to find out what the heck happens.

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