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Drivel
Unbelievable drivel. And badly written. Full of mistakes. Get an editor!
To Insanity from the Author
Thank you for your worthless comment. Have a nice day.
What do they want
A nice little story that could have gone further. The title and preamble did seem to promise a longer hotter steamy story.
Anyway nice narrative style.
As for the mostooks if they want perfection, read a paperback. If we were all perfect supper duper writers what sad place this would be?
What do they want
A nice little story that could have gone further. The title and preamble did seem to promise a longer hotter steamy story.
Anyway nice narrative style.
As for the mostooks if they want perfection, read a paperback. If we were all perfect supper duper writers what sad place this would be?
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