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Sensuality

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by curiositykitten03/07/07

Sensual Beginning

I've been there, honey! This is a great start - I would have liked to see you go farther with his one - more descriptive of the intensity of emotion that is experienced to make it really sizzle - I love the story line and the sensuality of your writing, though! Well-written!

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