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Between Fae and Foe Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/05/06

wow that was hot

nice place to leave off, please finish it. You have a really great story starting. need more now!

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by superfeluously_e10/30/14

Couldn't finish it

It didn't make sense to me her immediate surrender to the prince at her door immediately following her flashback of her mom talking about the fickle fae. Seemed to me a little more reluctance/hard to get made more sense for her acceptance of him following her mom's cautionary tale even if he is in her dreams. Just my opinion.

Also if her dad was royalty, and he's a prince, aren't they siblings?

Despite that, it's well written with great creativity

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