homeNon-Erotic PoetryContouredPublic Comments

All Comments  for

Contoured

bybluerains©
All
Comments (5)
by Anonymous

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by LeBroz11/03/06

~~

I can't help but picture
Homeless folk being fed
While self-important volunteers
Hover over them
Letting them know of all their
Shortcomings.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by My Erotic Trail11/03/06

contoured

I've been contoured

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by lobomao11/04/06

•) delicious blue

so we too are too
left to our petty peace of pieces
discards carding on the folded floor
we leave left wanting for nothing
yet in hearts we desire all the more

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by MyNecroticSnail11/04/06

I have no idea

what you are talking about.
Some of it sounds poetic, where is the concrete anchor for the poetry to swirl around?

do, do
not see

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by LeBroz04/28/07

~~

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,000 poems.



----------

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

Click here to leave your own comment on this submission!  or
Back to Contoured  or
More submissions by bluerains.

Add a
Comment

Post a public comment on this submission.

Post comment as (click to select):

Preview comment

Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar:

   Cancel