All Comments on 'A Gray Area Ch. 04'

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duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Wonderful Read!

Caden and Jason continue their rocky relationship as they continue to explore each other's lives. Interesting chapter. Enjoyable Read!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Nice story

I am enjoying the story and its pace. The amount of it you are giving out is too small though. It makes the story feel disjointed.

You can certainly do it in chapters, but I would rather have greater time between them and more substantial chapters to read.

M

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