The characters built up some more, the tension is increased. A new and interesting character is introduced. This story is being built very well. I'm looking forward to seeing the rest of it.
I've just discovered your work and I believe that this one is the best chapter I've read in a very long time on this web
the tension is building, the characters are emerging, the humour is starting to slip in, and there are more chapters to go.
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Coming along nicely
The characters built up some more, the tension is increased. A new and interesting character is introduced.
This story is being built very well. I'm looking forward to seeing the rest of it.
Well done!!
I've just discovered your work and I believe that this one is the best chapter I've read in a very long time on this web
happy to have stumbled upon this well written story
the tension is building, the characters are emerging, the humour is starting to slip in, and there are more chapters to go.
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