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Self-Control

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/09/06

Tense!

This appears to be a woman on the run - from herself as well as her associates. I found this strangely compelling and enjoyed the read very much. Well Written!

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by Anonymous11/09/06

WOW

So sexy, so hot without the need for the crudeness!
Huggs and thanks for a wonderful fanasty!
suzanne

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by Anonymous11/10/06

Tales of 2 Tails

So an uptown bitch who sells her soul only finds big word happiness being a cheap trailer trash lesbian.
Dr. Freud your telephone is ringing cathartic psychopathy that Lit and this typer deem emotional problems are erotic along with wet panty panters sharing the AH in safety in mental numbers.

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by Anonymous11/10/06

The name of the site is LITEROTICA

I can't imagine the mind that would find this erotic.

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by Anonymous11/11/06

Almost there but...

Unlike some of the other comments, I rather enjoyed this one. My only complaint was the part toward the end where the "woman in white" was submitting the rich wife should have been expanded, leading to her total submission and "freedom". Maybe a sequel with a flashback and more of the rich wife's "free" life as a submissive lesbian...

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by Mcmacladdie02/25/09

Different... in a good way :)

Just read this one, and after seeing some of the other comments I had to post. I enjoyed it quite a bit. It seems like the type of story that makes one think more about its characters motivations, rather than handing them to the reader on a silver platter. I commend you for it :)

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by Anonymous07/30/09

Good Story

I liked this story and would have liked to have had more.
The story line was a bit more original than many here - there's enough wham bam etc porn around if that's your thing.
R.

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