My Di

Okay

Just a bit too obvious.

much like

a vacation. You know where you will be ending up, but the trip there is still fun!

Fun Read!

Call me crazy - but I just enjoyed the heck out of this story. I loved the surprise ending - and no - I'm not giving it away. *grins* You did your job -Bob! Well Written!

Huh?

I wouldn't walk across the street for that salary and you make it sounds like this is a huge amount of money. I quit right after the character went wild over what, in today's world, is chump change.

Enjoyable

This is wild.

Very well done with a "Ribald Tales" ending.

Nothing like a convluted tale.

Hey, it works for me!

Man, I'd like to sit in on that conversation! That's worth a story in itself.

This was a fun read, Bob!

Regards, Jack

Okey story

An okey story, but anyone who did not anticipate the connection between Di and Diane has to be a little dense. I think they call it telegraphing your punchs. the Ct. Yankee

dont stop there

That is great if i was hubby i would be looking for the mountains with Dianne and Kirby there he will never get any sleep Please continue with chapter 2 i want to see how he talks himself out of this mess with Diane and Kirby
Atlanta,Ga.
Pat M.

Obvious or Not - Well Conceived & Delivered bobie

This is what your mind can deliver that is appreciated by 90% or more of readers.

bobie the only problem is that this is still a low percentage of the type of story that you chose to write.

Cheating yes, but self demeaning - not at all.

Thanks with more of this type looked forward to.

Pretty Good

I don't think that the husband has anything to worry about even if his wife figures out the truth. If Kirby is anything like the husbands in JPB's other stories she will end up in a closet watching hubby have sex with lots of other women. As soon as he is done she will leap outof the closet to suck another woman's pussy cream off of his cock, all the while accepting her role as a female cuckold and enjoying it immensely.

Turnabout is fair play, isn't it?

Enjoyed the tale

Good story even though you telegraphed the punchline.

Good Read****

Very entertaining story thanks for sharing .

Obvious, inevitable, and good. A nice tease of a story. We can imagine what (and who) comes next.

marvelous

hahahhahahahaah I loved it. Caught me off guard but a fantastic twist. good job