if im a friend i kill the sucker to the good of the world.(and the whore)
self-respect do you know the word?
all people need the self-respect... without that our world crash.
JPB, NOT A VERY GOOD STORY...MAYBE TRUE MAYBE NOT....NO CLOSURE...NO ENDING.....IF SOME BODY, SOMEWHERE WISHES TO PARAPHRASE THIS GOOD LUCK...TK U MLJ LV NV
I figured I'd like this. Motherfuck was I wrong! I hate when guys forgive a one time fuck up by a wife. That can be forgiveable, but there needs to be a lot of begging and atonement from her cheating ass. I don't give a flying fuck if she is knocked up, that is no excuse to stay with a whore. And then to make matters worse the guy enjoys the whole thing. Lets face it. Unless the baby (who is the daddy?) is a boy, there is not one single testicle in that house. 1 *
One indicator of a good author is writing stories that differ from their standard fare.
She's still a slut though, and I mean that in the harshest way. I don't condemn them for their lifestyle, just the way the wife approacehed it and the way the husband buckled when he confronted her.
I know that a willing cuckold (or one that even tolerates it, that makes him willing) deserves every bad thing he gets and I don't have to read about it. I know this is just a story but it pisses me off.
And suddenly you decide to be happy with a cuckolded husband? I mean, it's certainly your right as an author to write and post whatever you like. But it was a shock, after reading your other stories to suddenly find you writing this happy cuckold story. BARF!
I know of this type of thing happening around me, but do think she should have discussed this with hubby first. it could have turned out much differently. a DNA check seems to be in order, just to be sure, everything happened after she got pregnant.
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Anonymous11/15/14
not to bad
But it seems to me that there are a whole bunch of sorry motherfucker husbands out there that haven't got the guts to be a real man. she may have been pregnant so fucking what she could sleep in another room till the baby is born a DNA test done and throw her slutty whore ass out and while at it let all the wives of the other cocksuckers know that their so called husbands were fucking around on them. I just refuse to believe that any real man would do what this asshole ended up doing.
Zero character development. Charley is a moral wasteland and their needs to be DNA test to test for paternity. 10:1 charley is not the father and we know that she will be no mother.
JPB just mailed it in. Random character generator?
throw her out the third story window, make that 30th story window. then redefine what your definition of friend is, obviously the one you have isn't correct. retribution time for the locals.
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Anonymous02/23/15
All you guys out there with pregnant, cheating slut wives
Make sure you get it on video and then divorce the slut. Make sure you take her lover or lovers with you to the wood shed. Kind of hard not to know you screwing a married woman since she's pregnant. (At least most of the pregnant ones are married). Family, friends and even causal acquaintances all get copies of the slut in action. I can't think of anything lower than a pregnant woman screwing a bunch of guys and risking her life, her boyfriend/husband's life and the life of the soon to be born child. This was a new low for you Bob.
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Anonymous03/03/15
crap
Worthless wimp
An idiot with a dick
Somebody get a gun and put this fool in a box.
I wonder if you have ever, or will ever, explain to your readers why you have such a hatred for men. Is it that men have taken too many women from you? Is it that your multiple marriages indicate that you are not man enough to keep a woman? Or is it that your male characters simply reflect your opinion of yourself?
English
shit
if im a friend i kill the sucker to the good of the world.(and the whore)
self-respect do you know the word?
all people need the self-respect... without that our world crash.
This story is so outlandish that somehow I enjoyed it.
Lord have mercy, but it was a fun story. And certainly it is different; therefore, I rated it 5*****.
A KNOWN CUCKOLD
JPB, NOT A VERY GOOD STORY...MAYBE TRUE MAYBE NOT....NO CLOSURE...NO ENDING.....IF SOME BODY, SOMEWHERE WISHES TO PARAPHRASE THIS GOOD LUCK...TK U MLJ LV NV
When I saw the JPB byline....
I figured I'd like this. Motherfuck was I wrong! I hate when guys forgive a one time fuck up by a wife. That can be forgiveable, but there needs to be a lot of begging and atonement from her cheating ass. I don't give a flying fuck if she is knocked up, that is no excuse to stay with a whore. And then to make matters worse the guy enjoys the whole thing. Lets face it. Unless the baby (who is the daddy?) is a boy, there is not one single testicle in that house. 1 *
JPB. Just Pass my Balls
UGG!
Sorry JPB
While the writing mechanics are fine the story really sucked.
My God
Those two deserve each other. A worthless slut and a wimp. Nobody to like in this story.
WOW BOB!!!!!!
This is shitty even for you!
Really Bad
What the fuck kind of crap is this? I can't believe I read this from a prolific author. You must have had a humongous brain fart to write this.
And I thought
some of your other stories were crap. Too bad they don't have negative 5 rating.
LMAO
One indicator of a good author is writing stories that differ from their standard fare.
She's still a slut though, and I mean that in the harshest way. I don't condemn them for their lifestyle, just the way the wife approacehed it and the way the husband buckled when he confronted her.
I did not even finish the story.
I know that a willing cuckold (or one that even tolerates it, that makes him willing) deserves every bad thing he gets and I don't have to read about it. I know this is just a story but it pisses me off.
All those stories....
And suddenly you decide to be happy with a cuckolded husband? I mean, it's certainly your right as an author to write and post whatever you like. But it was a shock, after reading your other stories to suddenly find you writing this happy cuckold story. BARF!
Really!!?? How bout dressing in a pink nightie while in the closet.
Not my cup of tea but a story is a story no matter how pathetic. Thanks for the effort, I think?
Really!!?? How bout dressing in a pink nightie while in the closet.
Not my cup of tea but a story is a story no matter how pathetic. Thanks for the effort, I think?
good story
I know of this type of thing happening around me, but do think she should have discussed this with hubby first. it could have turned out much differently. a DNA check seems to be in order, just to be sure, everything happened after she got pregnant.
not to bad
But it seems to me that there are a whole bunch of sorry motherfucker husbands out there that haven't got the guts to be a real man. she may have been pregnant so fucking what she could sleep in another room till the baby is born a DNA test done and throw her slutty whore ass out and while at it let all the wives of the other cocksuckers know that their so called husbands were fucking around on them. I just refuse to believe that any real man would do what this asshole ended up doing.
Disgusting
Zero character development. Charley is a moral wasteland and their needs to be DNA test to test for paternity. 10:1 charley is not the father and we know that she will be no mother.
JPB just mailed it in. Random character generator?
Bullshit
Shit and more shit
2nd read
throw her out the third story window, make that 30th story window. then redefine what your definition of friend is, obviously the one you have isn't correct. retribution time for the locals.
All you guys out there with pregnant, cheating slut wives
Make sure you get it on video and then divorce the slut. Make sure you take her lover or lovers with you to the wood shed. Kind of hard not to know you screwing a married woman since she's pregnant. (At least most of the pregnant ones are married). Family, friends and even causal acquaintances all get copies of the slut in action. I can't think of anything lower than a pregnant woman screwing a bunch of guys and risking her life, her boyfriend/husband's life and the life of the soon to be born child. This was a new low for you Bob.
crap
Worthless wimp
An idiot with a dick
Somebody get a gun and put this fool in a box.
One of the worst from JPB...1*
One of the worst from JPB...1*...No more comments...
What is the real reason?
I wonder if you have ever, or will ever, explain to your readers why you have such a hatred for men. Is it that men have taken too many women from you? Is it that your multiple marriages indicate that you are not man enough to keep a woman? Or is it that your male characters simply reflect your opinion of yourself?
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