I dont rant much about your stories but you really
got to stop with this theme. Wife turns into a total slut and when he confronts her she says 'it didnt hurt you any - I was just as loving as I always was, etc etc etc'.
Besides the fact that youve beaten this particular line of reasoning to death, its also just about the stupidest thing Ive ever heard. After he agrees to it (her fucking other men) then it might be true but before that its just so stupid it hurts.
Whats the fucking point of being married if this is your relationship. You must be the ugliest fucker on the planet if you are so desperate for a piece of ass that you will pay upkeep on someone elses whore just so you have someplace to shove your noodle when the mood strikes. If you live with a wife like this then thats all you got too - a live in whore but your the only one paying for it when everyone else gets it for free. Without agreement before the fact there cant be any connection or partnership that would make staying married worth it.
All you have to do is go to a bar and sit there and someone will come after you eventually (how soon depends on what you look like). You dont even have to be smooth or good looking, just available. Bar sluts probably are cleaner and smell better than the wife who fucks multiple men, multiple times a day as well. Its just gross to think about. Even in the sluts in high school start looking wore out after less use than this and they have the healing powers of youth. An old married slut that fucks anything around at the drop of the hat is going to end up looking really long in the tooth, really fast.
Fucking random bar skanks is better than being married to a whore (unless she is rich). Its cheaper, you can do what you want all the off time you arent trying to get fucked (i.e. nobody telling you to clean the gutters when you would rather be watching football), and you dont have your friend and coworks laughing at you. Not to mention the wife - a random bar fuck might think you are a bad lay but she isnt going to think you're a pathetic asshole like your wife is bound to eventually.
You really do have more than few screws loose when it comes to some of your plots.
I dont rant much about your stories but you really
got to stop with this theme. Wife turns into a total slut and when he confronts her she says 'it didnt hurt you any - I was just as loving as I always was, etc etc etc'.
Besides the fact that youve beaten this particular line of reasoning to death, its also just about the stupidest thing Ive ever heard. After he agrees to it (her fucking other men) then it might be true but before that its just so stupid it hurts.
Whats the fucking point of being married if this is your relationship. You must be the ugliest fucker on the planet if you are so desperate for a piece of ass that you will pay upkeep on someone elses whore just so you have someplace to shove your noodle when the mood strikes. If you live with a wife like this then thats all you got too - a live in whore but your the only one paying for it when everyone else gets it for free. Without agreement before the fact there cant be any connection or partnership that would make staying married worth it.
All you have to do is go to a bar and sit there and someone will come after you eventually (how soon depends on what you look like). You dont even have to be smooth or good looking, just available. Bar sluts probably are cleaner and smell better than the wife who fucks multiple men, multiple times a day as well. Its just gross to think about. Even in the sluts in high school start looking wore out after less use than this and they have the healing powers of youth. An old married slut that fucks anything around at the drop of the hat is going to end up looking really long in the tooth, really fast.
Fucking random bar skanks is better than being married to a whore (unless she is rich). Its cheaper, you can do what you want all the off time you arent trying to get fucked (i.e. nobody telling you to clean the gutters when you would rather be watching football), and you dont have your friend and coworks laughing at you. Not to mention the wife - a random bar fuck might think you are a bad lay but she isnt going to think you're a pathetic asshole like your wife is bound to eventually.
You really do have more than few screws loose when it comes to some of your plots.
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Anonymous11/09/06
just another cockhold story
I hate wimp husband stories I alway's wondered who would be like that just alot of BS a better verson would have been for the husband to tell her it was fine and then turn around and start bringing women home and eye for an eye would have loved to see the wife's face would have been priceless
something that she has cost him. The respect of his so-called friends as well as the respect that she holds for him. Any husband who loved his wife as much as this character says he does would be devestated and furious especially at this time of the marriage when a look-for baby is on the way. This type of your stories is just too unbelievable to be enjoyable.
Don't you ever get tired of using the same rational:
How can I be harming you by my cheating if I'm giving you any less love/sex than I was before you found out and you were happy then? If it bothers you, then it must be because of your male ego and not because I'm doing anything wrong.
And you use that line almost EVERY SINGLE TIME in over 75% of your STORIES!
Of course if I could give negative numbers I would do that too for this story.
But MAN PLEASE get a new rational for cheating will ya? Just reading the same thinging process time after time just makes a horrible story that much WORSE to attempt to read
The same old, "you didn't lose anything out of my betraying you, I was still as affectionate and loving as always, etc. etc." The same rationale you use in every story it seems.
And the fact that he didn't lose anything. What bull crap! Now that half the neighborhood and most of their friends know that she treats him like that, do you think they will respect him? If I knew a couple that had someone fucking around on the other and everyone knew about it including the other spouse, I don't think I could be around that couple anymore.
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Anonymous11/09/06
I think that some how or some way the island
if England should slip inot the sea and kill all these cucks men who live there. How could any man want to watch his wife who is carring his child fuckin other men? You are a bunch of sick wimp ass queers. Disgusting fucking faggets.
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Anonymous11/09/06
Waiting for the sequel
To make this dumb story ...dumber
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Anonymous11/09/06
JPB's Back to this drivel!
If nothing else, you are consistent in creating these wimp-husband dogshit stories. As usual, it sucked!
It's a shame that one has to trip over two of your bullshit stories to get to one that is really good, and this story is not one of the ones.
Why you are preoccupied by:
1) husbands who are interested in watching, hearing about, and/or participating in their wives' extra-marital sex lives
2) husbands eating creampies from their wives after having had sex with their lovers
3) wimp husbands in general
4) wives who cuckold their husbands and then throw the infidelity in the husband's face
5) wives who trivialize or rationalize their behavior as not affecting their marriage
6) wives who become uncontrollable sluts after tasting sex outside of their marriage
7) wives who are obsessed or become obsessed with interracial sex
8) wives who are obsessed with fucking men with large dicks
is beyond me. It's disappointing to read one of your stories and find the plot line following one or more of the above threads. These topics do nothing for me and I would guess for most men, but they obviously interest you (JPB) since you continue to write stories with these plot lines.
I continue to read your stories looking for the gems; and the gems are well worth waiting for.
It's apparent that you all have read the story. If you dislike them so much then ignore them. It's not easy to write any story let alone one that excites you. I see most have commented as anonymous so if you have better stories, post them!
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Anonymous11/09/06
JPB doesn't write to be popular...
...he just has nothing else to do besides writing and publishing his philosophy on life, love, relationships, women, and men. His stories are just a boring as he is.
It has nothing to do with being popular but more an avenue to vent your fantasies. If everybody bashed the stories they don't like this site would disappear. I for one loath gay and incest stories yet I don't dog the people that write them and/or read them. Stop reading JPB stories and that will end your frustration with his writing technique.
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Anonymous11/09/06
Give it up for a while, Bob.
It's clear you're out of material and have been for months. It's getting to the point where someone could program a little script to generate your stories anymore. Take a break until you can come up with something other than the same story you write constantly now.
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Anonymous11/09/06
is the baby charley
aids and stds will be your kid.it show what values the writer has.
seriously I cant wait for this skank to become a Mother. if this wimp BOB guy wnats a reason why nite fuck anyone if You are getting some... here are 2
1) death of the mon by STD
2) how can the mother ever tell her own kid or pre teen or teenager what is right or wrong?
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Anonymous11/09/06
funny
It is interesting that neith spouse has a clue what marital fidelity should mean. Perhaps the whore is just using her knowledge of how stupid her husband is against him. Fidelity is about more than ensuring paternity or preventing disease, or at least it should be.
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Anonymous11/09/06
Loretta
Loretta and her husband should die of aids, and with any luck the baby will be stillborn.......just like JPB
I find the submissive/masochistic husband stories exciting. Wish a bit more graphic sex had been included.
I am surprised at the hostility of many of the recent comments on this story. Choose the type of erotic stories that excite you and stay away from the type that do not turn you on, after all "one mans meat is another mans poison".
Well all I can say is, to me it's the usual wimp husband story that JPB is known world wide for. Wouldn't surprise me if the baby isn"t someone else's! I gave you the 25 for the first part where he nails the guy...
What do you do if your pregnant wife is cheating on you repeatedly? You throw her out, and divorce her! It wouldn't hurt to collect evidence against all our soon to be exfriends, so their wives can get even with them. The only thing he owes this slut is the minimun amount of child support. Let the slut earn her living on her back.
This is scary - I agree with Harry, who nailed this one. JPB, you're something else. Some of your stories are so good - and others (like this one) are really awful.
You need to change your name to Just ole Klinger as you remind me of the hillarious episode on MASH where Klinger tries to get out of the army by writing the same version of women pregnant and parents dying. It ends up with half the family prego and half dying. Your stories for a long time are just repeated scenarios.
I honestly hope you find something more in life than finding your self esteem in stories as your plunge here is not very flattering to you right now. Go fishing Bob and breathe some fresh air and find some good people to brighten your day as you are reflecting too much the lunatics on this site.
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Anonymous11/10/06
Gee bobie - 1 cuckster out of 26 commentators
Now there is a sick reason to continue your male humiliation self cuckster stories - however that average doesn't hold up long term. It dives further and lower doesn't it bobie.
Yet you pathetic onward and downward for the diminishing few. Why is that?
I speculate that your predilection is just that. Love of demeaning yourself and males at most every opportunity
It is sad that you are so addicted to that self wimp infection of no self respect that excites cuz everyone else knows.
For example - So in this story now you have to go back and apologise to her john that you hit him and embarrassed him in front of his wife. Damn that could hurt their marriage!
And since you have already said that you must remain chaste for the whore of your children whats the point.
Therein lies the depth of your non-erotic sickness bobie. It is layer after layer of subhuman self demeanment that is intended to further disgust and disrespect the lowest scum crawling excuse for a man there now must be to get excited enough to finally get it up.
Is that your little sick audience bobie? Is it worth it?
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Anonymous11/10/06
Ugh!
The lack of imagination, poor character development and zero plot earns you this score.
Loretta is a faithful wife for years and she becomes pregnant and some guy compliments her on day so she becomes a slut. Then to make it okay with Charlie she fuck him more often. That is called guilt. Further, she fucks any guy including his friends so they can laugh behind his back. So Charlie becomes her pimp and voyeur.
Okay, then what is the point of the story? Since no normal adult act in this manner this story is a fantasy. It fails to be erotic so it is not a good stroke story. I only hope that based upon your bio article that you wrote hundreds of stories that this story was one of the early ones. It is not worth the electrons used to form the wordprocessing file.
You really have some haters reading your story. Just because the plot is not what EVERYONE wants...it is, however, good and even excellent to others. I say kudos to your writings and keep it up---Playa! and I'm......
SweetnHot2005N
I hate these kinds of stories. Why do you keep writing them? What the fuck? Are people really this fucked up? Do people actuall enjoy reading this crap?
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Anonymous03/19/07
oh good
JPB has not had the balls to allow comments lately but because another author refered to this story I have a chance to remind bob about how much I think his stories suck.
Well written, pretty enjoyable read, for a WIMP story. I feel obligated to score low for wimp stories, just becuase of content, and it sets a bad example for others.
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Anonymous03/19/07
jpb is it your upbring or you have so much hate
your response to whoring wives and cockold men is mentally off the norm.why a man sit and watch his friends fuck his wife and not do anything.the logic and common sense don't mix.you have deep rooted problems there.
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Anonymous03/20/07
Why are the readers surprised?
JPB has been submitting basically a "10 to 1" ratio of wimp husband stories as compared to stories where the "cheated upon significant other" has some balls and takes appropriate revenge. Obviously, this type of story is an example of his "trade-mark" efforts.
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Anonymous04/13/07
DAY JOB
You didn't give up your day job did you? I wsted my time reading this story, does that tell you something?
I've often wondered why Bob uses these same elements in so many of his stories. I think it must be because he's trying diligently to get the cuckolded wimp hubby genre just right. He's practicing, tuning up the story if you will, so the tale will be perfect. If that's not it, then I can't explain why one would recycle the same plot, same characters and same motifs over and over again? The shock value is long gone by now, and few readers find such tales erotic.
Bob says he writes for his own satisfaction. That puts the recycling aspect into an even stranger light. Can Bob not remember what he's written? I suppose not. He's certainly prolific and perhaps he just can't keep all the stories straight. I know I can't.
Maybe he has a computer program that generates stories based on a few story outlines. That would explain some of the self-plagarism that appears in stories of the same ilk. In any case, I digress. I don't find tales such as this one erotic and, as fiction goes, it's thin at best. I see little that is worthy of commendation here.
I'm sure you're at least slightly amused by all the rumpus you manage to stir up. If nothing else, the sheer vitriol ought to tell you how effectively your stories get to some of your readers. Personally, I find I either like your stories or I dislike 'em, there are only a few that fall in between. This is one of those 'tweeners. Reactions to the particular plot aside, I always find your stories well done and I'm constantly amazed at how prolific you are. I'm glad you started allowing comments with your story because there are obviously some very strong emotions out there in need of venting. I always look forward to your next story, even though I don't know if it's going to make me grin or groan. Come to think of it, maybe that's exactly why I look forward to them. Thanks for sharing.
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Anonymous01/28/08
most boring characters you could write!!
I don't know what it is with Bob but his characters are so shallow and boring that I can't seem to care if the guy is a wimp or a guy who takes his revenge cause all his characters are all void of anything that could make them feel the slightest bit real. It's like watching a movie where all the actors playing real human beings are being done by Terminators with no emotion at all and just saying their lines. It would be nice if you could actually work on trying to give your characters some depth and real human traits.
Should have the baby tested to see if it's his . .
I only give 25 because the story is reasonably well-written. I doubt Loretta has been faithful up to her pregnancy, based on her attitude. The baby needs a DNA test so hubby can find out if it's his or not. Although, come to think about it, he likes creampie and a cheating wife, so maybe it will also turn him on to have a mystery child to raise . . . Also, Mom and baby need HIV testing after delivery, and so does hubby.
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Anonymous09/07/08
Just plain nasty
You can do better...you HAVE done better.
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Anonymous01/19/09
Ecchhh
I'd die before becoming a willing cuckold. I suspect 99 percent of all other men feel the same way. That said, how in hell did the other entire one percent end up on this site?? Seriously, is literotica turning into the quasi gay/wimp hubby site? Why can't we get another category for writers and readers who "get off" on that shit so the rest of us can read "loving wives" stories?
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Anonymous03/28/09
Bob is a little crazy if he thinks that the reader
will put up with shit like this. "Charley, unless you say no I'm going to do it."
I didn't know what to say. The whole thing was too way out and weird for a simple guy like me, "Loretta, I don't know. It's too much too soon and I'm going to need to think on it for a while. This isn't like making a decision on buying a new couch or getting new carpeting." Now here is a clear case of how fucked Bob is. Why not have the husband say " HELL NO BITCH" he has to have a story that his little peckerhead brain could grasp. That's why so many of his stories are shit that's becausze he is. If you don't like it email me and i;ll really tell your punk ass off.Nyminus@yahoo.com
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Anonymous04/02/09
IS PLAINBOB GETTING SENILE?
Is PlainBob getting senile? He used to be a talented writter. His stories used to have a twist, and the end was unexpected, but now "his husbands" are getting too soft. They just are cuckolds with no value as human beings.
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Anonymous10/13/09
Very bad stories!!!
You are getting worse every story you write. There must be something really wrong with your mind to keep on with this type of stories.
English
I dont rant much about your stories but you really
got to stop with this theme. Wife turns into a total slut and when he confronts her she says 'it didnt hurt you any - I was just as loving as I always was, etc etc etc'.
Besides the fact that youve beaten this particular line of reasoning to death, its also just about the stupidest thing Ive ever heard. After he agrees to it (her fucking other men) then it might be true but before that its just so stupid it hurts.
Whats the fucking point of being married if this is your relationship. You must be the ugliest fucker on the planet if you are so desperate for a piece of ass that you will pay upkeep on someone elses whore just so you have someplace to shove your noodle when the mood strikes. If you live with a wife like this then thats all you got too - a live in whore but your the only one paying for it when everyone else gets it for free. Without agreement before the fact there cant be any connection or partnership that would make staying married worth it.
All you have to do is go to a bar and sit there and someone will come after you eventually (how soon depends on what you look like). You dont even have to be smooth or good looking, just available. Bar sluts probably are cleaner and smell better than the wife who fucks multiple men, multiple times a day as well. Its just gross to think about. Even in the sluts in high school start looking wore out after less use than this and they have the healing powers of youth. An old married slut that fucks anything around at the drop of the hat is going to end up looking really long in the tooth, really fast.
Fucking random bar skanks is better than being married to a whore (unless she is rich). Its cheaper, you can do what you want all the off time you arent trying to get fucked (i.e. nobody telling you to clean the gutters when you would rather be watching football), and you dont have your friend and coworks laughing at you. Not to mention the wife - a random bar fuck might think you are a bad lay but she isnt going to think you're a pathetic asshole like your wife is bound to eventually.
You really do have more than few screws loose when it comes to some of your plots.
I dont rant much about your stories but you really
got to stop with this theme. Wife turns into a total slut and when he confronts her she says 'it didnt hurt you any - I was just as loving as I always was, etc etc etc'.
Besides the fact that youve beaten this particular line of reasoning to death, its also just about the stupidest thing Ive ever heard. After he agrees to it (her fucking other men) then it might be true but before that its just so stupid it hurts.
Whats the fucking point of being married if this is your relationship. You must be the ugliest fucker on the planet if you are so desperate for a piece of ass that you will pay upkeep on someone elses whore just so you have someplace to shove your noodle when the mood strikes. If you live with a wife like this then thats all you got too - a live in whore but your the only one paying for it when everyone else gets it for free. Without agreement before the fact there cant be any connection or partnership that would make staying married worth it.
All you have to do is go to a bar and sit there and someone will come after you eventually (how soon depends on what you look like). You dont even have to be smooth or good looking, just available. Bar sluts probably are cleaner and smell better than the wife who fucks multiple men, multiple times a day as well. Its just gross to think about. Even in the sluts in high school start looking wore out after less use than this and they have the healing powers of youth. An old married slut that fucks anything around at the drop of the hat is going to end up looking really long in the tooth, really fast.
Fucking random bar skanks is better than being married to a whore (unless she is rich). Its cheaper, you can do what you want all the off time you arent trying to get fucked (i.e. nobody telling you to clean the gutters when you would rather be watching football), and you dont have your friend and coworks laughing at you. Not to mention the wife - a random bar fuck might think you are a bad lay but she isnt going to think you're a pathetic asshole like your wife is bound to eventually.
You really do have more than few screws loose when it comes to some of your plots.
just another cockhold story
I hate wimp husband stories I alway's wondered who would be like that just alot of BS a better verson would have been for the husband to tell her it was fine and then turn around and start bringing women home and eye for an eye would have loved to see the wife's face would have been priceless
Not worth commenting ON!
!!!!!!
Oh, but there is...
something that she has cost him. The respect of his so-called friends as well as the respect that she holds for him. Any husband who loved his wife as much as this character says he does would be devestated and furious especially at this time of the marriage when a look-for baby is on the way. This type of your stories is just too unbelievable to be enjoyable.
Question Bob
If you actually care to read one-
Don't you ever get tired of using the same rational:
How can I be harming you by my cheating if I'm giving you any less love/sex than I was before you found out and you were happy then? If it bothers you, then it must be because of your male ego and not because I'm doing anything wrong.
And you use that line almost EVERY SINGLE TIME in over 75% of your STORIES!
Of course if I could give negative numbers I would do that too for this story.
But MAN PLEASE get a new rational for cheating will ya? Just reading the same thinging process time after time just makes a horrible story that much WORSE to attempt to read
-Risq
Damn it looks like my theme was taken!
The same old, "you didn't lose anything out of my betraying you, I was still as affectionate and loving as always, etc. etc." The same rationale you use in every story it seems.
And the fact that he didn't lose anything. What bull crap! Now that half the neighborhood and most of their friends know that she treats him like that, do you think they will respect him? If I knew a couple that had someone fucking around on the other and everyone knew about it including the other spouse, I don't think I could be around that couple anymore.
I think that some how or some way the island
if England should slip inot the sea and kill all these cucks men who live there. How could any man want to watch his wife who is carring his child fuckin other men? You are a bunch of sick wimp ass queers. Disgusting fucking faggets.
Waiting for the sequel
To make this dumb story ...dumber
JPB's Back to this drivel!
If nothing else, you are consistent in creating these wimp-husband dogshit stories. As usual, it sucked!
Two out of three is bad
It's a shame that one has to trip over two of your bullshit stories to get to one that is really good, and this story is not one of the ones.
Why you are preoccupied by:
1) husbands who are interested in watching, hearing about, and/or participating in their wives' extra-marital sex lives
2) husbands eating creampies from their wives after having had sex with their lovers
3) wimp husbands in general
4) wives who cuckold their husbands and then throw the infidelity in the husband's face
5) wives who trivialize or rationalize their behavior as not affecting their marriage
6) wives who become uncontrollable sluts after tasting sex outside of their marriage
7) wives who are obsessed or become obsessed with interracial sex
8) wives who are obsessed with fucking men with large dicks
is beyond me. It's disappointing to read one of your stories and find the plot line following one or more of the above threads. These topics do nothing for me and I would guess for most men, but they obviously interest you (JPB) since you continue to write stories with these plot lines.
I continue to read your stories looking for the gems; and the gems are well worth waiting for.
Congratulation
Yet another pile of shit from the master
Give him a break!
It's apparent that you all have read the story. If you dislike them so much then ignore them. It's not easy to write any story let alone one that excites you. I see most have commented as anonymous so if you have better stories, post them!
JPB doesn't write to be popular...
...he just has nothing else to do besides writing and publishing his philosophy on life, love, relationships, women, and men. His stories are just a boring as he is.
Popular?
It has nothing to do with being popular but more an avenue to vent your fantasies. If everybody bashed the stories they don't like this site would disappear. I for one loath gay and incest stories yet I don't dog the people that write them and/or read them. Stop reading JPB stories and that will end your frustration with his writing technique.
Give it up for a while, Bob.
It's clear you're out of material and have been for months. It's getting to the point where someone could program a little script to generate your stories anymore. Take a break until you can come up with something other than the same story you write constantly now.
is the baby charley
aids and stds will be your kid.it show what values the writer has.
It is always a toss up on what you will get
from JPB.
Please GOD Please KILL JPB
Please... its NOT asking too much is it?
seriously I cant wait for this skank to become a Mother. if this wimp BOB guy wnats a reason why nite fuck anyone if You are getting some... here are 2
1) death of the mon by STD
2) how can the mother ever tell her own kid or pre teen or teenager what is right or wrong?
funny
It is interesting that neith spouse has a clue what marital fidelity should mean. Perhaps the whore is just using her knowledge of how stupid her husband is against him. Fidelity is about more than ensuring paternity or preventing disease, or at least it should be.
Loretta
Loretta and her husband should die of aids, and with any luck the baby will be stillborn.......just like JPB
A good submissive husband !
I find the submissive/masochistic husband stories exciting. Wish a bit more graphic sex had been included.
I am surprised at the hostility of many of the recent comments on this story. Choose the type of erotic stories that excite you and stay away from the type that do not turn you on, after all "one mans meat is another mans poison".
Hmm!!
Well all I can say is, to me it's the usual wimp husband story that JPB is known world wide for. Wouldn't surprise me if the baby isn"t someone else's! I gave you the 25 for the first part where he nails the guy...
Paul
Another Wimpy Husband Story
What do you do if your pregnant wife is cheating on you repeatedly? You throw her out, and divorce her! It wouldn't hurt to collect evidence against all our soon to be exfriends, so their wives can get even with them. The only thing he owes this slut is the minimun amount of child support. Let the slut earn her living on her back.
ditto Harry
This is scary - I agree with Harry, who nailed this one. JPB, you're something else. Some of your stories are so good - and others (like this one) are really awful.
Klinger
You need to change your name to Just ole Klinger as you remind me of the hillarious episode on MASH where Klinger tries to get out of the army by writing the same version of women pregnant and parents dying. It ends up with half the family prego and half dying. Your stories for a long time are just repeated scenarios.
I honestly hope you find something more in life than finding your self esteem in stories as your plunge here is not very flattering to you right now. Go fishing Bob and breathe some fresh air and find some good people to brighten your day as you are reflecting too much the lunatics on this site.
Gee bobie - 1 cuckster out of 26 commentators
Now there is a sick reason to continue your male humiliation self cuckster stories - however that average doesn't hold up long term. It dives further and lower doesn't it bobie.
Yet you pathetic onward and downward for the diminishing few. Why is that?
I speculate that your predilection is just that. Love of demeaning yourself and males at most every opportunity
It is sad that you are so addicted to that self wimp infection of no self respect that excites cuz everyone else knows.
For example - So in this story now you have to go back and apologise to her john that you hit him and embarrassed him in front of his wife. Damn that could hurt their marriage!
And since you have already said that you must remain chaste for the whore of your children whats the point.
Therein lies the depth of your non-erotic sickness bobie. It is layer after layer of subhuman self demeanment that is intended to further disgust and disrespect the lowest scum crawling excuse for a man there now must be to get excited enough to finally get it up.
Is that your little sick audience bobie? Is it worth it?
Ugh!
The lack of imagination, poor character development and zero plot earns you this score.
Loretta is a faithful wife for years and she becomes pregnant and some guy compliments her on day so she becomes a slut. Then to make it okay with Charlie she fuck him more often. That is called guilt. Further, she fucks any guy including his friends so they can laugh behind his back. So Charlie becomes her pimp and voyeur.
Okay, then what is the point of the story? Since no normal adult act in this manner this story is a fantasy. It fails to be erotic so it is not a good stroke story. I only hope that based upon your bio article that you wrote hundreds of stories that this story was one of the early ones. It is not worth the electrons used to form the wordprocessing file.
SleeplessinMD
HaterAde Drinkers!!!
You really have some haters reading your story. Just because the plot is not what EVERYONE wants...it is, however, good and even excellent to others. I say kudos to your writings and keep it up---Playa! and I'm......
SweetnHot2005N
You and your whore wife are really fucked up
in the head. Hope you both catch AIDS!~ BTW That baby doesn't have a chance. To bad it's not the kid's fault.
piece of shit
I hate these kinds of stories. Why do you keep writing them? What the fuck? Are people really this fucked up? Do people actuall enjoy reading this crap?
oh good
JPB has not had the balls to allow comments lately but because another author refered to this story I have a chance to remind bob about how much I think his stories suck.
Wimp!
Well written, pretty enjoyable read, for a WIMP story. I feel obligated to score low for wimp stories, just becuase of content, and it sets a bad example for others.
jpb is it your upbring or you have so much hate
your response to whoring wives and cockold men is mentally off the norm.why a man sit and watch his friends fuck his wife and not do anything.the logic and common sense don't mix.you have deep rooted problems there.
Why are the readers surprised?
JPB has been submitting basically a "10 to 1" ratio of wimp husband stories as compared to stories where the "cheated upon significant other" has some balls and takes appropriate revenge. Obviously, this type of story is an example of his "trade-mark" efforts.
DAY JOB
You didn't give up your day job did you? I wsted my time reading this story, does that tell you something?
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How embarrassing for you. 'Nuf said.
Random musings on Bob and his plainness
I've often wondered why Bob uses these same elements in so many of his stories. I think it must be because he's trying diligently to get the cuckolded wimp hubby genre just right. He's practicing, tuning up the story if you will, so the tale will be perfect. If that's not it, then I can't explain why one would recycle the same plot, same characters and same motifs over and over again? The shock value is long gone by now, and few readers find such tales erotic.
Bob says he writes for his own satisfaction. That puts the recycling aspect into an even stranger light. Can Bob not remember what he's written? I suppose not. He's certainly prolific and perhaps he just can't keep all the stories straight. I know I can't.
Maybe he has a computer program that generates stories based on a few story outlines. That would explain some of the self-plagarism that appears in stories of the same ilk. In any case, I digress. I don't find tales such as this one erotic and, as fiction goes, it's thin at best. I see little that is worthy of commendation here.
What can I say, Bob?
I'm sure you're at least slightly amused by all the rumpus you manage to stir up. If nothing else, the sheer vitriol ought to tell you how effectively your stories get to some of your readers. Personally, I find I either like your stories or I dislike 'em, there are only a few that fall in between. This is one of those 'tweeners. Reactions to the particular plot aside, I always find your stories well done and I'm constantly amazed at how prolific you are. I'm glad you started allowing comments with your story because there are obviously some very strong emotions out there in need of venting. I always look forward to your next story, even though I don't know if it's going to make me grin or groan. Come to think of it, maybe that's exactly why I look forward to them. Thanks for sharing.
most boring characters you could write!!
I don't know what it is with Bob but his characters are so shallow and boring that I can't seem to care if the guy is a wimp or a guy who takes his revenge cause all his characters are all void of anything that could make them feel the slightest bit real. It's like watching a movie where all the actors playing real human beings are being done by Terminators with no emotion at all and just saying their lines. It would be nice if you could actually work on trying to give your characters some depth and real human traits.
say what ?
he cuckholds himself.
Should have the baby tested to see if it's his . .
I only give 25 because the story is reasonably well-written. I doubt Loretta has been faithful up to her pregnancy, based on her attitude. The baby needs a DNA test so hubby can find out if it's his or not. Although, come to think about it, he likes creampie and a cheating wife, so maybe it will also turn him on to have a mystery child to raise . . . Also, Mom and baby need HIV testing after delivery, and so does hubby.
Just plain nasty
You can do better...you HAVE done better.
Ecchhh
I'd die before becoming a willing cuckold. I suspect 99 percent of all other men feel the same way. That said, how in hell did the other entire one percent end up on this site?? Seriously, is literotica turning into the quasi gay/wimp hubby site? Why can't we get another category for writers and readers who "get off" on that shit so the rest of us can read "loving wives" stories?
Bob is a little crazy if he thinks that the reader
will put up with shit like this. "Charley, unless you say no I'm going to do it."
I didn't know what to say. The whole thing was too way out and weird for a simple guy like me, "Loretta, I don't know. It's too much too soon and I'm going to need to think on it for a while. This isn't like making a decision on buying a new couch or getting new carpeting." Now here is a clear case of how fucked Bob is. Why not have the husband say " HELL NO BITCH" he has to have a story that his little peckerhead brain could grasp. That's why so many of his stories are shit that's becausze he is. If you don't like it email me and i;ll really tell your punk ass off.Nyminus@yahoo.com
IS PLAINBOB GETTING SENILE?
Is PlainBob getting senile? He used to be a talented writter. His stories used to have a twist, and the end was unexpected, but now "his husbands" are getting too soft. They just are cuckolds with no value as human beings.
Very bad stories!!!
You are getting worse every story you write. There must be something really wrong with your mind to keep on with this type of stories.
Perhaps your worst
Just fuck you bob.
pregnant wife
I've watched my wife fuck other men and women but not when she was pregnant. Your account is very erotic and so is your wife.
YOU
ARE ONE SCREWED UP PIECE OF SHIT!!!!
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