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shit
if im a friend i kill the sucker to the good of the world.(and the whore)
self-respect do you know the word?
all people need the self-respect... without that our world crash.
This story is so outlandish that somehow I enjoyed it.
Lord have mercy, but it was a fun story. And certainly it is different; therefore, I rated it 5*****.
A KNOWN CUCKOLD
JPB, NOT A VERY GOOD STORY...MAYBE TRUE MAYBE NOT....NO CLOSURE...NO ENDING.....IF SOME BODY, SOMEWHERE WISHES TO PARAPHRASE THIS GOOD LUCK...TK U MLJ LV NV
When I saw the JPB byline....
I figured I'd like this. Motherfuck was I wrong! I hate when guys forgive a one time fuck up by a wife. That can be forgiveable, but there needs to be a lot of begging and atonement from her cheating ass. I don't give a flying fuck if she is knocked up, that is no excuse to stay with a whore. And then to make matters worse the guy enjoys the whole thing. Lets face it. Unless the baby (who is the daddy?) is a boy, there is not one single testicle in that house. 1 *
JPB. Just Pass my Balls
UGG!
Sorry JPB
While the writing mechanics are fine the story really sucked.
My God
Those two deserve each other. A worthless slut and a wimp. Nobody to like in this story.
WOW BOB!!!!!!
This is shitty even for you!
Really Bad
What the fuck kind of crap is this? I can't believe I read this from a prolific author. You must have had a humongous brain fart to write this.
And I thought
some of your other stories were crap. Too bad they don't have negative 5 rating.
LMAO
One indicator of a good author is writing stories that differ from their standard fare.
She's still a slut though, and I mean that in the harshest way. I don't condemn them for their lifestyle, just the way the wife approacehed it and the way the husband buckled when he confronted her.
I did not even finish the story.
I know that a willing cuckold (or one that even tolerates it, that makes him willing) deserves every bad thing he gets and I don't have to read about it. I know this is just a story but it pisses me off.
All those stories....
And suddenly you decide to be happy with a cuckolded husband? I mean, it's certainly your right as an author to write and post whatever you like. But it was a shock, after reading your other stories to suddenly find you writing this happy cuckold story. BARF!
Really!!?? How bout dressing in a pink nightie while in the closet.
Not my cup of tea but a story is a story no matter how pathetic. Thanks for the effort, I think?
Really!!?? How bout dressing in a pink nightie while in the closet.
Not my cup of tea but a story is a story no matter how pathetic. Thanks for the effort, I think?
good story
I know of this type of thing happening around me, but do think she should have discussed this with hubby first. it could have turned out much differently. a DNA check seems to be in order, just to be sure, everything happened after she got pregnant.
not to bad
But it seems to me that there are a whole bunch of sorry motherfucker husbands out there that haven't got the guts to be a real man. she may have been pregnant so fucking what she could sleep in another room till the baby is born a DNA test done and throw her slutty whore ass out and while at it let all the wives of the other cocksuckers know that their so called husbands were fucking around on them. I just refuse to believe that any real man would do what this asshole ended up doing.
Disgusting
Zero character development. Charley is a moral wasteland and their needs to be DNA test to test for paternity. 10:1 charley is not the father and we know that she will be no mother.
JPB just mailed it in. Random character generator?
Bullshit
Shit and more shit
2nd read
throw her out the third story window, make that 30th story window. then redefine what your definition of friend is, obviously the one you have isn't correct. retribution time for the locals.
All you guys out there with pregnant, cheating slut wives
Make sure you get it on video and then divorce the slut. Make sure you take her lover or lovers with you to the wood shed. Kind of hard not to know you screwing a married woman since she's pregnant. (At least most of the pregnant ones are married). Family, friends and even causal acquaintances all get copies of the slut in action. I can't think of anything lower than a pregnant woman screwing a bunch of guys and risking her life, her boyfriend/husband's life and the life of the soon to be born child. This was a new low for you Bob.
crap
Worthless wimp
An idiot with a dick
Somebody get a gun and put this fool in a box.
One of the worst from JPB...1*
One of the worst from JPB...1*...No more comments...
What is the real reason?
I wonder if you have ever, or will ever, explain to your readers why you have such a hatred for men. Is it that men have taken too many women from you? Is it that your multiple marriages indicate that you are not man enough to keep a woman? Or is it that your male characters simply reflect your opinion of yourself?
loved the story
I didn't agree with the results, but it was well written, and self explanatory. people react differently to different things, and hubby is no exception. was she right or wrong, only hubby should be the one to judge. he is the one who married her. from what was written, I would have a DNA check done. I wouldn't be raising someone else's kid while they are laughing at me. nicely done author...
I feel sorry for the baby
being born to a mother with multiple STDs is not a good thing for an infant.
the parents deserve what they get.
Rule change.
There needs to be a rule on this site that states that authors must categorize exactly what's in the stories. That way, readers that don't want to read about stupid cuck husbands can avoid them. It infuriates me when I have to read blindly while hoping for either a BTB, reconciliation or just a plain old divorce story but instead getting stories about husbands that love seeing their wives being used or the husbands being humiliated and liking it. I HATE that trash. Men like that have no pride and deserve zero respect.
Well written, as usual.
But sick, just sick. What about the child? Mom's a whore, and dad's a wimp.
I agree, what about the poor kid.
This little fag really thinks he is the father, ha, ha.
I am sure this appeals to a certain demographic
It leaves me cold and frankly, I do not think it is sustainable.
Even if the willing cuck, who only seems to measure a relationship in how much sex he is getting, doesn't mind and NEVER minds (something I doubt), here is the reality.
She is fucking close friends. They have wives. Their wives might have self respect. This is an explosive situation no matter how you look at it...and you cannot say that this woman does not have some serious dominance and disrespect issues, that she is incredibly emotionally insensitive and that her 'matter of fact' tone strongly suggests that SHE is the one with an ego problem. "Lil' Sex Goddess" thinks she is all that because she can give away free pussy.
So meh and double meh to this story. It is someone's cup of tea, but it is not mine.
So he's a knowing cuckold?
Why? First off, how about diseases? Secondly, how is he ever going to be able to look himself in the mirror knowing his wife is a cheating slut and that his so called friends are stabbing him in the back? How do you look at them and not see them snickering at you? Time to divorce this slut before you get stuck with child support and alimony. Is it really your kid? Another well written tale with a horrible ending. UGH!
that's just nasty
Not only is it wrong i wonder if the baby is his if she could be a round heeled slut now she was probably always was and what a wuss
a story by a faggot
A story written by a cum guzzling gutter queer for other cock slurping fruitcakes to enjoy. JPB why not just kill yourself and cleanse the gene pool.
Worthless!!!
This is beneath you!!! You are a better writer than this drivel!!
other than endanging herself, the baby, and him wiht diseases she is just a common slut
I fuck them but love you scene means you are basically no more or less than all the others except I let you pay my way in life. She is a whore you pay for in lifestyle but gives it away for free to others. Wow, she really loves not you but your money.
And Now The Truth
A couple of weeks later Charlie began to feel I'll. His condition did not improve, so he went to his doctor to be checked out. The results were alarming. The doctor said he had gotten an STD from a lover. The doctor asked who he could have contracted an STD from. He told the doctor 'Only my wife'. Over time the news got worse. About 6 months later more test results came in. Both Charlie and their unborn baby were HIV-Positive.
I'm glad this was short!
Not too much time invested.
Now I know why it got such a low score.
Not my cup of tea either.
Wish you would have given a wimp alert up front
misinformed
Heard you were a BTB writer. Obviously sources were wrong!
You are more like 3rd husband of serial cheating wife exposed on Facebook profile of dearbornmt@yahoo.com.
He knows of her numerous affairs and given his panty sniffing fetish he has to know the creamy center pressed against his nose is meant to humiliate him. She lost job as college instructor in Helena Montana because of info on Facebook. Funny that knowing cuckold would call himself BIG DADDY IKE
her comment it hasnt hurt you is against one of the main reason for not cheating
the main reason for not cheating is the danger of diseases, followed by pregnancy, and ego has nothing to do with either item. Lastly fidelity has to do with trust and love not lust, a cheating wife isn't in opposition to her husbands ego, she is showing her lack of respect and love for her marriage and her husband. When someone says it hasn't effected our marriage, one can reply, and all that time was time taken away from our marriage. 1* for having a mentally ill woman manipulate a mentally ill man.
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