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Excellent work
That is a wonderful Christmas story, Darkniciad. I loved reading that so much. Good Luck in the competion.
A clever little tale
Nice piece of writing, Dark. The jolly fat man legend seems more real when you tell it. Good luck in the contest.
Interesting
Interesting take on the Christmas legend.
R. Richard
Lovely
I like your version of the legend. I'm pleased you didn't shove sex in the tale somewhere. I believe that would have destroyed the magic and wonder. Good luck in the contest! ~Minx
A magical tale
Wonderfully told, Dark. I loved this one, it left me with a smile on my face.
I loved it............
One of the best. Good luck on winning.
Sarah M.
The world continues to grow...
And your world continues to grow...It is a touching and impressive addition to it...
very different and well written....
and thank you for sharing this with Lit.!
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