Well written, erotic as hell and best of believable. I'm ready for the next installment.
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Anonymous11/10/06
On the right track
On the right track.Add a little erotic fantasy on the lady's part to make it more sexy.Expand on the foursome theme.
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Anonymous11/10/06
"Sir, more please?"
You write very well, and the story is realistic and believable. Tell us soon what her request will be!!
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Anonymous11/10/06
Hot stuff
Keep it coming
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Anonymous11/10/06
Great story
Keep up the writing. I can't wait until the next chapter. What is the offer, but more importantly, the acceptance?
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Anonymous11/10/06
Hurry up with Ch. 02!!!
Great story! One of the best I've read in a while. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Anonymous11/10/06
Bravo
What a story....I had something similar happen 25yrs ago. Brought back very pleasant memories.
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Anonymous11/10/06
very hot
very erotic, go on to the next chapter
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Anonymous11/11/06
Very good
I really liked the story waiting for the next installment.
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Anonymous11/11/06
Please continue
Real grown-up people. The man mature for his age, and taking charge. The woman giving in to lust,domination and pleasure. The man and woman getting their rocks off, and rocking the other's world, too. A hot couple enjoying hot free-flowing lusty sex. Please do continue.
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Anonymous11/11/06
Excellent Story & A Great Tease For Chapter Two
Keep up the excellent story. You write well and you chose a great place to have a chapter break. Well done
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Anonymous11/11/06
more
please do more and make them just as hot
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Anonymous11/11/06
GREAT!!
kEEP IT GOING!
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Anonymous11/11/06
This is a very good story please continue it
you are such a great writer please hurry up with the next chapter
Please don't stop now. Monica as discribed, is my second wife. Ten years older than me, & my sisters best friend. Once she got her glass of wine, & her hands on my cock, she was like a woman possessed.Ended up marrieing her, & fucking 3 of her sisters. Great family.
English
HOT HOT HOT
Keep the story going.
well done, hot and believable, keep them coming
Well written, erotic as hell and best of believable. I'm ready for the next installment.
On the right track
On the right track.Add a little erotic fantasy on the lady's part to make it more sexy.Expand on the foursome theme.
"Sir, more please?"
You write very well, and the story is realistic and believable. Tell us soon what her request will be!!
Hot stuff
Keep it coming
Great story
Keep up the writing. I can't wait until the next chapter. What is the offer, but more importantly, the acceptance?
Hurry up with Ch. 02!!!
Great story! One of the best I've read in a while. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Bravo
What a story....I had something similar happen 25yrs ago. Brought back very pleasant memories.
very hot
very erotic, go on to the next chapter
Very good
I really liked the story waiting for the next installment.
Please continue
Real grown-up people. The man mature for his age, and taking charge. The woman giving in to lust,domination and pleasure. The man and woman getting their rocks off, and rocking the other's world, too. A hot couple enjoying hot free-flowing lusty sex. Please do continue.
Excellent Story & A Great Tease For Chapter Two
Keep up the excellent story. You write well and you chose a great place to have a chapter break. Well done
more
please do more and make them just as hot
GREAT!!
kEEP IT GOING!
This is a very good story please continue it
you are such a great writer please hurry up with the next chapter
WOW
Please don't stop now, you have a great story. I want to know whats going to happen next!!!
A moving story of Love
walterio you really have away with your words i hope you dont keep us waiting for a long time with the next chapter i cant wait for the next one.
Pat
Don't stop now!!!
Please don't stop now. Monica as discribed, is my second wife. Ten years older than me, & my sisters best friend. Once she got her glass of wine, & her hands on my cock, she was like a woman possessed.Ended up marrieing her, & fucking 3 of her sisters. Great family.
Thanks for a good read, looking forward to more!!
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