All Comments on 'I Lapped her Juicy Dripping Pussy'

Good start- I gave it 100 for great girl girl action; try and put more raunchy details in the sex scenes- thats what your readers are searching for

"she was total heterosexually" huh?

good and hot

more raw nasty sex between the two women is needed..

It was over to quickly! enjoyed what was there but more would be good.Chapter 2 ?

ur probably some ugly ass bitch that was nasty u fat cow

that sounds good could u 2 come to my house

sounds delcious. i've had the experience and turned full lesbian from it. my and my girl are still together 20 years on :3

Reading this story as a straight fEmale made me sooooo horney and I have dEcidEd I have to expereince the soft Erotic wet pussy of another woman ahhhhh I can't wait soooooo dripping just thinkig abot it ahhHhhhh

Mmm I fingering my wet pussy now. That got me so hot and wet. I need someone to lick this cum up. ;)

hi your story really got me hot and throbbing thank you

Oh how I would have loved to be her!!!! My pussy is SO hot & wet just reading that and visualizing every motion, every lick....mmmmmmm sooo hot!!!!

My pussy is so wet. Reading this makes me so hot. I want someone to lick my puss and make me cum!

Im Sooooo Wet Right Now, Im Fingering Myself, I Just Need Someone To Lick Up All My Cum. My Pussy Feels So Good. I Just Really Need A Tongue Or Dick Inside Me.!!!!

I am dripping wet after that I really need a dick to come for me after that

Could this have been written by a woman? I don't think so. It's badly-composed and sloppy. A waste of time!

Heterosexual or not, this gal must've watched a lot of lesbian porn to have so easily being enraptured by a true honey of a lesbian. Hey man, gals are the best at making real love with another girl, something men has to work hard on one to not being the joke of women gossiping around the water fountain. Nice imagination and experience as a guide in writing such a hot story.