This story is super hot. I didn't understand the business about the panties, but the rest was really good and sexy. I enjoyed it as much as Gabby did.
Nookiehunter
by
Anonymous11/14/06
Incandescent love story between a man and
WOMEN, or in this case 'a woman," expressed through his only "safe" approach: their most intimate garment. I have never read a better exposition of "pantie fetish" in my too many years. As a father and man equally injured by betrayal, I was not troubled by the incest but stunned by the daughters intuition and ability to draw her father back into love, the love of life and a sincere honest relationship. Bravo!
jjws %)
by
Anonymous11/14/06
No lead up
The long lead up was a waste- it was too sweet and light. Zero sexual tension. Last page of sex was OK
What every man dreams of happening .......... fantastic
by
Anonymous11/17/06
Sensual
Genuinely brilliant writing all the way through. Your style is excellent and you wrote with genuine sensuality. One extremely long, but utterly gratifying tease.
As I have often said, not everybody likes tales of incest, but having said that, I find stories of true love (as opposed to lust) between close family members often to be heart warming and 'almost' acceptable! I enjoyed this really delightful story. Pete.
I normally don't get off on incest stories but the panty fetish drew me into the story and made me so horny that I had to find a quiet place to jackoff. Excellent story as I am into panties.
by
Anonymous11/20/06
Great
Fantastic build-up to the end! Great work!
by
Anonymous11/20/06
Really great story
I've read your stories elsewhere and was happy to find you on this site. This story was so well written, I think it may be your best effort so far. Keep writing those incest tales. They are just the best.
WC
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Anonymous12/29/06
a good story
I really enjoyed the story all together. I was glad that Gabby didn't go from virgin to a "fuck my ass, daddy" cum slut overnight. That made it more realistic. This story didn't follow the same tired formula I've noticed and I think that made it easily enjoyable. Thanks!
by
Anonymous01/05/07
good story
That was an awesome story. I was hard the whole time i was reading it. You did an awesome job telling your story. That is something I would like to do with my daughter if I ever had a beauty like yourself. Thanks for the story.
gabriella an her daddy was one i really enjoyed, one of the best you are famous for. homer.
by
Anonymous03/24/07
Amazing!
Very erotic writting. Thank you!
by
Anonymous05/27/07
THANKS!
Scouries, you are in a caliber of your own on this site. If I could find another of your caliber, I would be reading his/her whole catalogue as avidly as I read yours. In any case, I can't just wantonly hand out 5's to you as I am judging each story against your others, but thanks for your hot and relatively grammatically correct writing, also for not using annoying euphemisms for the penis. Have a great day! Keep writing!
Beautifully written. Highly erotic but, more than that, romantic, in that it portrays the emotions of the daughter and father. Full marks.
by
Anonymous06/19/07
Gabriella's Daddy...
made sense erotically, which appealed to my erotic sense. A close father/daughter relationship flowing easily, almost fatefully into something...more! A pleasure to read!
by
Anonymous08/09/07
It was so easy...
to simply flow along with the story. It was a gentle and wonderful joy to read, congratulations on such a wonder accomplishment. Please, please do not deprive the readers of your talent...we would be sorely lacking otherwise.
Jim - I can only ever give you a 5 in the scoring but am quite happy to give you 100 every time I read one of your stories - they really are a turn-on - I love them - what about some grandma/grandson stories too - Jena121
by
Anonymous10/26/07
Love Story
This is not only a sex thing but a true love story. Dad and daughter, not with standing. This a great thing!! Alice
by
Anonymous12/14/07
Outstanding
At last, someone who takes the trouble to create a story around the "act" we all want to read about, keeps the language appropriate for the scenario and makes the whole thing believable. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Ty :-)
by
Anonymous01/01/08
It reminded me how much I wanted my grand daughter.
The story reminds me of when we allow things to mature on their own, they can be some of the most beautiful pieces of art we ever laid our eyes on! Your piece is no different!
Reading it, you couldn't help but feel the genuine love Gabriella has always had for her daddy, and his love for her is the same: mental and physical! I predict the two of them will have a very happy and long, wonderful life together as husband and wife, both being blessed by many children they will have together! Another excellent story, Scouries!
by
Anonymous04/08/08
Absolutely wonderful!
Thank you so much for taking the time to craft such an amazing submission. Wonderful character development and dialogue! I enjoyed it very much and would rate it a 200 if I could!
by
Anonymous04/29/08
Awesome - fucking awesome
That's it I can't take any more of this torture . You swept me into your story and had me fucking that young lady on the beach .
I really enjoyed your story of Gabriella and her father. It was almost believable and so exciting. I think I might try some of your other stories.
by
Anonymous08/08/08
Mmmm Delicious
Sooo Good. So Sexy.
Hope there will be more of this.
by
Anonymous08/21/08
Exceptional!
Thank you for an entertaining story,no doubt the best I've
read on Literotica.
Please continue your story telling, I'll be looking for
your next tale.
by
Anonymous08/29/08
Gabriella's Daddy
Gabriella's Daddy Bravo! One of the best! Love all your submissions. Look forward to the next story.
by
Anonymous08/31/08
Loved It
Keep up the HOT writing
by
Anonymous09/06/08
WOW
this was amazing.
I couldnt keep my hand away from my pussy
I had so many orgasms
it reminded me of my own sexual desires for my father. Whom I have fucked on several occasions. Amazing piece of work
This is a great story. It was one the best ive read.
by
Anonymous09/16/09
well written
good story well written, enjoyed it thanks
by
Anonymous09/27/09
blah
expand the "cum scene" and itd be perfect
by
Anonymous11/08/09
GABBY AND HER DADDY
Your writing has the ability to describe both a woman's and man's erotic thoughts and feelings in a single story. So, both men and women can be erotically stimulated reading your stories. You seem to understand the female psyche quite well! To me, at least, most women authors seem to lack this dual dimension. They mainly write from the woman's perspective. You help me understand the male sensual mind quite effectively and I get very turned on by your stories. Keep um cumming.
by
Anonymous11/30/09
Astonishing
Absolutely fantastic. I could come 70 times picturing this story and still read it again.
by
Anonymous12/19/09
beatiful story
I loved it ,as I have the other few I,ve read ..How ever I,ve discovered a wonderful problem with your writing,That being; I,M not accomplishing any thing. seems I finish one & have 2 start another one, .Thank GOD i,m good at procrastination . LOL thank you 4 sharing These wonderfully erotic submissions (L4P)
by
Anonymous04/01/10
You're A Slutty Tease!!
Reading works like yours is something like the foreplay before the sex act and I couldn't read fast enough to get to the climax....and it was worth the wait!! But just like real sex, the time they spent on the bed fully making love was over too quickly. After the long tease, the actual sex was almost a quickie in comparison. So, I was a little bit disappointed. She could have given him lots more oral sex and he could have given her the same oral sex just to lengthen the time they spent together on that bed.
I was pleased to read the comments and not find the usual divisive one.....
and I apologize for always thinking of the very few people that seem to want to denigrate your writing. So, this story apparently satisfied all of us. I liked the tale coming from the female lead, her point of view. It was a nice change of pace from other stories whose tale-teller was the unique male with monster cock and unlimited stamina and ability to bed any woman who dares come close to his writhing serpent. We all know about the constant lust that men have for women, even relatives, but this offered the growing lust that developed in the female mind - nice to see that lust is not one-sided and can be coupled with love as well. Since we don't expect that lust/love from most females we meet, it adds an erotic element that is difficult to ignore, especially when one's hand begins to rub one's cock. Thanks for making that an instinctive move!
English
Great
Excellent build up, you tease the reader and then give them what they want with a mind blowing climax!
Hot
Great build up for a great story
More please
Super Hot!
This story is super hot. I didn't understand the business about the panties, but the rest was really good and sexy. I enjoyed it as much as Gabby did.
Nookiehunter
Incandescent love story between a man and
WOMEN, or in this case 'a woman," expressed through his only "safe" approach: their most intimate garment. I have never read a better exposition of "pantie fetish" in my too many years. As a father and man equally injured by betrayal, I was not troubled by the incest but stunned by the daughters intuition and ability to draw her father back into love, the love of life and a sincere honest relationship. Bravo!
jjws %)
No lead up
The long lead up was a waste- it was too sweet and light. Zero sexual tension. Last page of sex was OK
Sexelant
What every man dreams of happening .......... fantastic
Sensual
Genuinely brilliant writing all the way through. Your style is excellent and you wrote with genuine sensuality. One extremely long, but utterly gratifying tease.
Well done!
A really delightful story!!!
As I have often said, not everybody likes tales of incest, but having said that, I find stories of true love (as opposed to lust) between close family members often to be heart warming and 'almost' acceptable! I enjoyed this really delightful story. Pete.
Love It!
I normally don't get off on incest stories but the panty fetish drew me into the story and made me so horny that I had to find a quiet place to jackoff. Excellent story as I am into panties.
Great
Fantastic build-up to the end! Great work!
Really great story
I've read your stories elsewhere and was happy to find you on this site. This story was so well written, I think it may be your best effort so far. Keep writing those incest tales. They are just the best.
WC
a good story
I really enjoyed the story all together. I was glad that Gabby didn't go from virgin to a "fuck my ass, daddy" cum slut overnight. That made it more realistic. This story didn't follow the same tired formula I've noticed and I think that made it easily enjoyable. Thanks!
good story
That was an awesome story. I was hard the whole time i was reading it. You did an awesome job telling your story. That is something I would like to do with my daughter if I ever had a beauty like yourself. Thanks for the story.
truely the best!
made me wish to be that daughter...
WOW !! Super story !!
Super ! SUPER STORY !!!
still on the cue u r!
gabriella an her daddy was one i really enjoyed, one of the best you are famous for. homer.
Amazing!
Very erotic writting. Thank you!
THANKS!
Scouries, you are in a caliber of your own on this site. If I could find another of your caliber, I would be reading his/her whole catalogue as avidly as I read yours. In any case, I can't just wantonly hand out 5's to you as I am judging each story against your others, but thanks for your hot and relatively grammatically correct writing, also for not using annoying euphemisms for the penis. Have a great day! Keep writing!
A tale of incest is rarely romantic
Beautifully written. Highly erotic but, more than that, romantic, in that it portrays the emotions of the daughter and father. Full marks.
Gabriella's Daddy...
made sense erotically, which appealed to my erotic sense. A close father/daughter relationship flowing easily, almost fatefully into something...more! A pleasure to read!
It was so easy...
to simply flow along with the story. It was a gentle and wonderful joy to read, congratulations on such a wonder accomplishment. Please, please do not deprive the readers of your talent...we would be sorely lacking otherwise.
another hot one
yes scouries, you have done it again, another sensual sexy story, you seem to have a flair of building up to the crescendo. great tale, thank you
Wow
Jim - I can only ever give you a 5 in the scoring but am quite happy to give you 100 every time I read one of your stories - they really are a turn-on - I love them - what about some grandma/grandson stories too - Jena121
Love Story
This is not only a sex thing but a true love story. Dad and daughter, not with standing. This a great thing!! Alice
Outstanding
At last, someone who takes the trouble to create a story around the "act" we all want to read about, keeps the language appropriate for the scenario and makes the whole thing believable. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Ty :-)
It reminded me how much I wanted my grand daughter.
Love For Gabriella
The story reminds me of when we allow things to mature on their own, they can be some of the most beautiful pieces of art we ever laid our eyes on! Your piece is no different!
Reading it, you couldn't help but feel the genuine love Gabriella has always had for her daddy, and his love for her is the same: mental and physical! I predict the two of them will have a very happy and long, wonderful life together as husband and wife, both being blessed by many children they will have together! Another excellent story, Scouries!
Absolutely wonderful!
Thank you so much for taking the time to craft such an amazing submission. Wonderful character development and dialogue! I enjoyed it very much and would rate it a 200 if I could!
Awesome - fucking awesome
That's it I can't take any more of this torture . You swept me into your story and had me fucking that young lady on the beach .
loved it
omg i loved that story i think it may be one of my favorites.
once again
i am amazed on how wet i got... keep it up
Loved It
I really enjoyed your story of Gabriella and her father. It was almost believable and so exciting. I think I might try some of your other stories.
Mmmm Delicious
Sooo Good. So Sexy.
Hope there will be more of this.
Exceptional!
Thank you for an entertaining story,no doubt the best I've
read on Literotica.
Please continue your story telling, I'll be looking for
your next tale.
Gabriella's Daddy
Gabriella's Daddy Bravo! One of the best! Love all your submissions. Look forward to the next story.
Loved It
Keep up the HOT writing
WOW
this was amazing.
I couldnt keep my hand away from my pussy
I had so many orgasms
it reminded me of my own sexual desires for my father. Whom I have fucked on several occasions. Amazing piece of work
Outstanding, as always!
Another great tale, Jim! I don't know how I managed to overlook this one until now. It was really entertaining. Thanks again for all of your stories.
great
easily one of best stories ive read on here!!!
cum
this made me cum multiple times
good
would of been 100 if it didnt take three pages to get to what everyone truly wanted to read about
Great
This is a great story. It was one the best ive read.
well written
good story well written, enjoyed it thanks
blah
expand the "cum scene" and itd be perfect
GABBY AND HER DADDY
Your writing has the ability to describe both a woman's and man's erotic thoughts and feelings in a single story. So, both men and women can be erotically stimulated reading your stories. You seem to understand the female psyche quite well! To me, at least, most women authors seem to lack this dual dimension. They mainly write from the woman's perspective. You help me understand the male sensual mind quite effectively and I get very turned on by your stories. Keep um cumming.
Astonishing
Absolutely fantastic. I could come 70 times picturing this story and still read it again.
beatiful story
I loved it ,as I have the other few I,ve read ..How ever I,ve discovered a wonderful problem with your writing,That being; I,M not accomplishing any thing. seems I finish one & have 2 start another one, .Thank GOD i,m good at procrastination . LOL thank you 4 sharing These wonderfully erotic submissions (L4P)
You're A Slutty Tease!!
Reading works like yours is something like the foreplay before the sex act and I couldn't read fast enough to get to the climax....and it was worth the wait!! But just like real sex, the time they spent on the bed fully making love was over too quickly. After the long tease, the actual sex was almost a quickie in comparison. So, I was a little bit disappointed. She could have given him lots more oral sex and he could have given her the same oral sex just to lengthen the time they spent together on that bed.
I was pleased to read the comments and not find the usual divisive one.....
and I apologize for always thinking of the very few people that seem to want to denigrate your writing. So, this story apparently satisfied all of us. I liked the tale coming from the female lead, her point of view. It was a nice change of pace from other stories whose tale-teller was the unique male with monster cock and unlimited stamina and ability to bed any woman who dares come close to his writhing serpent. We all know about the constant lust that men have for women, even relatives, but this offered the growing lust that developed in the female mind - nice to see that lust is not one-sided and can be coupled with love as well. Since we don't expect that lust/love from most females we meet, it adds an erotic element that is difficult to ignore, especially when one's hand begins to rub one's cock. Thanks for making that an instinctive move!
Standard
Another story to your usual high standard, an excellent read
B
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