Feminine Seduction

byAfroerotiK©

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by Anonymous

by Anonymous11/16/06

Wonderful

You have an amazing way of describing everything that's going on, and I like that your characters don't immediately hop in the sack, it feels more real that they have some hesitation. When the sex does happen, though, you make it smoking hot.

by Trinique_Fire10/20/07

betraying your very own turn ons...

...is incredibly sexy. This is the second story I've read of yours, and both of them were similar in dialogue and action. Normally I don't like that, but it was actually really hot and made me grin. I like your style and ability.

You've definitely made a new fan here.

xx

by Anonymous02/19/09

beautiful

absolutly amazing. very erotic, but at the same time it wasnt a "jerk story" (although i dont doubt that one could get off to it). i always love your stoires, even though this is the first one iv comented on. i especially love your portrayal of african americans as more than just the normal sterotypes. im actually a white guy, but i absolutly love black women, and hate how their usually just shown as ghetto bitches. anyways, i talk too much. amazing story, as always. please keep up the good work.

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