Good Read. They were a perfect pair. I love happy endings.
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Anonymous11/16/06
Did she or didn't she?????
Hello,
Well i would have like to know if she said yes or not and more action!! The story is good tho.
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Anonymous11/19/06
YES or NO!
I want to know to! Lovely story!
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Anonymous05/01/08
Too short!
You make such interesting characters that it's a shame that you don't make the story longer or have several parts. I felt the part where they got together would have made a great story in itself. It didn't have to be crunched down into two paragraphs. Then their reunion would have been an exciting concluding chapter.
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Anonymous07/14/08
Perfect!!
I didn't see that coming but it worked out perfectly for them in the end. IN THE END, get it Ha ha! good work!
English
Damn Girl!
Good Read. They were a perfect pair. I love happy endings.
Did she or didn't she?????
Hello,
Well i would have like to know if she said yes or not and more action!! The story is good tho.
YES or NO!
I want to know to! Lovely story!
Too short!
You make such interesting characters that it's a shame that you don't make the story longer or have several parts. I felt the part where they got together would have made a great story in itself. It didn't have to be crunched down into two paragraphs. Then their reunion would have been an exciting concluding chapter.
Perfect!!
I didn't see that coming but it worked out perfectly for them in the end. IN THE END, get it Ha ha! good work!
WOW, WOW, WOW!!!
That was freaking HOTTT!!!!
You deserve 10 stars and 2 thumbs up!!!! I think you are super talented!
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