All Comments on 'Evening Falls'

You did it right Ungenderless. Beautiful story.

Just the right mix of love, passion and sadness. And a happy ending in the bargain. Kudos!

This was a very moving and realistic feeling story. It was also beautiful in the love and understanding between Holly and Thea.

But "algidity"? OK, it pays to increase my word power, but you could have just said "cold." :)

Such a sweet, tender love story.

Sweet story. I kept getting confused about who was who, but I'm sure that's just me. :) Good luck in the contest, may the sweeps leave you be. ~Minx

It was a beautiful job of setting up two characters we could care about. I liked the way you had them interact, like real people instead of perfect lovers. The dialogue was a bit rough but it shows wonderful promise. Great job, sweety!

A very powerful and touching work!

with some intense sex as well! Good luck in the contest.

Bravo; moving, touching, esxy

Really like this sort of short, bittersweet story.

I know this was written a long time ago, but I'm just getting around to reading it, and I think it is very good. Thank you for sharing it with us.