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delightfully erotic
'Her quicksand skin'... a great perspective that was written really well (~_~) I enjoyed your write!
Excellent
imagery, a lovely sensual poem with depth. Mentioned in today's new poem reviews
Mmmm
I think my favorite line is the first: She never glows. I had to read on from there!
Delightful
read, thanks for sharing
TT
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Very good poem. Good title. Good words. A little iffy about the line breaks in some areas. Not sure about ending a line with "of" or "a" but that's only a minor complaint and not really a complaint at all. :)
this was a delicious draw
into her by your hand, by your mind.. Thank you. On par with Eve about a couple "to...a" words which sort of leave a draw out on the flow...almost as if on purpose...that irrisitable draw
lose yourself
in her quicksand skin
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