by nytewolf
Really hot start to your literary career.
I like the style and the imagination
Keep going
Leave it that way, please. Your obvious lack of education is distracting, and your writing painfully suffers because of it. Go back to watching porn, and leave writing to those of us who can compose a proper sentence.
Thanks...Loser!
Well now I give you a 75 for your first time writing. DON'T pay any attention to "Anonymous in The South" after all they were to (ASHAMED) to leave their name.
I for one would like to see more of this one or more like it, maybe even bringing Anna the "girlfriend" into the mix with mom and you. Keep writing, But next time please do use puncuation.. "winks" makes it easier to follow....
Paul
got the basis for many chapters, worked in mouthers hesitancy in breaking a taboo instead of rushing straight in.
What happened next,they were overcome by lust and shagged each other to a standstill,got knotted and had to call the fire brigade to help them shuffle joined together to the waiting ambulance.
I was masterbating to this when my mum walked in and caught me with my cum just starting to shoot
whats the rest of the story
write the whole story to my email
lilbadboy4ever91@hotmail.com
I WAS 9, SOWERED, IN MY TERRY-CLOTH ROBE AND SAT NEXT TO MOM ON TEH COUCH TO WATCH A MOVIE. MOM WORE WHITE SHORTS AND A BLOUSE. SHE PUT HER ARM AROUND ME AND I LEANED AGAINST HER. I WAS VERY AWARE OF HER'. SHE RUBBED MY ARM LIGHTLY AND MY SHOULDER PRESSED AGAISNT HER BREAST!
THEN SHE KISSED THE TOP OF MY HEAD. I PARTED MY THIGHS AND MY ROBE OPENED AND SHE PUT HER HAND ON MY THIGH AND CARRESSED ME. EVENTUALLY SHE MASTURBATED ME
I printed this story and jacked off in my bed last night. I had to be quiet so my redheaded mom wouldn't hear ;-)
as I read your story I had to get naked and masturbate and it didn't take me long to ejaculate xxxxxxxx
Hey dude your story at the beginning got me hot and hard...but near to the end it totally sucked!!!
Giovani
It was really hot this story I'm super hard
I loved it. I fuck my son daily with me on top. This narration thrilled and I showed it to my son and we had fantastic sex.
Sugandhi.Vellore.India.
And I love the comment of the reader who wrote hwt. He was jerking off to the story "when my mum walked in and caught me with my cum just starting to shoot." That is so fucking cool! I sure wish my own dear mother had watched me blow my balls and splatter my semen all around the place. Bet she would've been bug-eyed, her baby boy all grown up and she'd be thinking, "gee, that is some load of sperm my kid's shooting! His father never shot so much."
Soon we were French kissing, and I was fondling one of my mom's breasts as we fell back onto the bed together. Mom finally pulled her lips away from mine, as she looked me straight in the eyes. "This will need to be our very private secret," she told me as she straddled me, moving her pussy over the head of my painfully hard cock. As I felt my cock enter her, it was a slow progression down because she was so tight. Mom let out a sigh of relief when our groins finally touched together. She slowly stated gyrating on my cock, grabbed my hands and put them on her tits. I gladly fondled them with enthusiasm as my mother worked her tight pussy on my cock. I was in heaven as we increased our pace, and mom began to moan from her laboring. It was quite a sight to see as I watched her facial expressions as her orgasm hit her. She was bucking up, and down on my cock hard, and I was squeezing her tits as she did. I felt myself reach the point of no return, and I exploded inside her hungry pussy over, and over again!!!
i been fucking my mom for over 39 years its always hot and wet, cant wait till tonight
I loved your story, half way through I had to pull out my cock and spit on it and start to masturbate mmmm mmmm I shot a nice load of cum. :)
wow i loved the story i had to stop reading and jack off myself just thinking about what will happen next good story man.
Mom and I love masturbating together. I always cum on her hairy pussy.
I was 15 yrs old when my mom climbed in bed with me she was nude and told me to never say anything to no one, she let me eat her pussy till she cum a couple of times she never shaved it, it was so thick with hair she had a set of 46ddd and dark nipples, I fuck her for a couple of yrs when no one was around
Why do great story's end so soon , it was just starting to warm up , then the end , please continue with this story .