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Between Fae and Foe Ch. 04

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by Anonymous11/16/06

good

I have been following this story since it started. I am really enjoying it. I think you need just a little more in each chapter. They seem to be over too quickly. Other than that, it is great. Keep the story going, it has a nice plot to it.

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by Anonymous03/10/14

Good

Everything is pretty well written. The story itself is pretty unique and interesting. Other than a few grammatical errors that aren't really important, I find this story really good! I highly enjoy it. Keep up the good work!

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