Well written-story with good dialogue, but it took a while to see where the story was going.
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Anonymous11/12/06
Delightful story
A well balanced story. The characters are refreshingly simple and yet have a depth and likeability that translates into the warm, cozy feeling we all look for at this time of the year. Impressive.
Solid characters that come across as real people, with just the right touch of romance in the last place you'd think of it, espcially when it comes across as real too.
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Anonymous11/13/06
Good job!
Well written..loved the romance. Left with our own conclusions. Great Story!
I liked the story, but felt the end was a bit abrupt. I'd have liked more time spent on the happily ever after...
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Anonymous03/27/07
HOPE!!!!
There should always be hope. The saving of the money and knowing one day she could leave that life behind, with the courage to know she had to do something for herself and finding something in the nice man. Nice!!! You did it and you don't have to go any further. Waiting to read some more of your stories. Thanks D.
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interesting
Well written-story with good dialogue, but it took a while to see where the story was going.
Delightful story
A well balanced story. The characters are refreshingly simple and yet have a depth and likeability that translates into the warm, cozy feeling we all look for at this time of the year. Impressive.
Well done
Solid characters that come across as real people, with just the right touch of romance in the last place you'd think of it, espcially when it comes across as real too.
Good job!
Well written..loved the romance. Left with our own conclusions. Great Story!
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Sweet little romance, Jenny. Good luck in the contest. ~Minx
Great story
It was a surprise, and I didn't expect it from the start of the story. Heartwarming, which is what holiday stories should be all about.
Well written
The contrast between the professional and personal lives was especially well-drawn.
Keep it up...
you make it look so easy....
very well written, a good example of the art that conceals art.
Good one!
I liked the story, but felt the end was a bit abrupt. I'd have liked more time spent on the happily ever after...
HOPE!!!!
There should always be hope. The saving of the money and knowing one day she could leave that life behind, with the courage to know she had to do something for herself and finding something in the nice man. Nice!!! You did it and you don't have to go any further. Waiting to read some more of your stories. Thanks D.
Well done
Nice story, well written.
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