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Lots of background info, but no real story
I wanted to know what this empress looked like, what she was wearing, and how the men were to avenge themselves upon her. That should have been both kinky and highly erotic, but it never happens in this story.
Thank You
For writing a non-erotic story on an erotic website. Redundancy!
Wow, you have issues.
I'm all about D/s stuff, but this story was more angry than sexy. I've seen plenty of resentful male Tops fantasizing about taking down a Domme in my day, upset that she doesn't buy into their stupid Gorean filter of the world, and this story seemed like it was exactly that brand of resentment boiled down into a short story. Femsub stuff is great, but where's the hot part? Where's the part where she's captured, spanked, raped, and eventually given her place as the new palace pet? This didn't seem written from a place of horniness but rather from resentment. I'm sure you can do better.
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