All Comments on 'College Girl and Her Daddy's Trip'

Excellent, and hot. I'm a regular reader (Ireland) and share your interest.

Enjoyed your story. Hope you will continue. She is a hot babe, and access to many others. Dad should be exhausted helping take care of others. Could even include college men and professsors

wonderful; sexy; hot. Its erotic to read such a hot slam bam incest sex story written from the girls angle. Nice and hot, I am becoming a great fan. All I can say is:"More please"

have a daughter, I've now got a HOT, sexy blueprint I can use after about 18 years.

I really appreciate all of the compliments. It's awesome. Please continue to comment readers!

dayuummmmmmmmmmmmmm. shes a very freaky grl, dont be tellin momma,first you get her brain then you have a moana!

Sexy

Story was incomplete - 1st chapter just getting started when it ended. If you are going to write stories - beginning, middle and ending not just teasing us with the intro to the story.

These two stories were written more than six years ago, and I am wondering why you didn't continue. You have lots of room to expand this father-daughter relationship, and I hope I can encourage you to do so. You have a good, direct, style of writing, and there are no big errors in spelling or grammar. Parenthetically, I also am drawn to your photo in the bio -- at least I hope it is you in the picture.

Leider habe ich nicht jedes Wort verstanden, aber das war auch nicht unbedingt notwendig.Die Geschichte hat mir sehr gut gefallen.

I love the passion between daughter and daddy.

great work! had me cummin

Excellent writing for a first time writer. Originality and flow of story as well. Wish it continued...

I freaking loved this! Please right more!

Damn what a hot and sexy story. I need to go home to my daughter.Miss her so much. Hope you really do like fucking your daddy. dp

Not much writing here!! WEAK WRITING

I loved this! Please write more! What happened after thir vacation? Maybe her mother could be involved?