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a grudging "A"
I'll give you an A because it was well written, but, the context was a little screwey to me, i can hear your dominant side screaming its head off between the lines, but where is the submission here, i cant find it, theres no softness, its all hard edges and the first person narrative sounds a bit too self absorbed to enjoy serving anyone, the sub is all about service, a sub gets his/her pleasure through submission to anothers desire,its about surrender, this just seems very antagonistic. but it inspired thought , and held my attention to the end, so keep working at it, i'd love to see more from you here at Lit.-Millisande
And the Point Is?
You got my attention too, but attention is often fleeting. It easily comes and goes.
I think what disturbs me about your essay is the attitude that you showed. It's commendable that you are fulfilled in your lifestyle choice - and with your Mistress. However, you seemed to sneer at those who accepted your Mistress' offer of her 'toy'.
Is the point to challenge the authority of another Dominant or to share an experience in which both parties can grow together?
aziza
I Understand
We surrender and from our pain we find true submission, within that we will find a power like none we have never known.
Excellent...
You have brought out the underlying dynamics of the lifestyle perfectly!
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