All Comments on 'Opening Night'

Very nicely written - pace is kept up; eroticism is hot. Look forward to the opening night!

I thought that was so hot and i hope you will write more of Jess and Adrianne there so Sexy together keep up the great writing.

Thanks

Pat.

Atlanta,Ga.

An otherwise very good story was ruined by lack of quotation marks.

Basic english writing 101, people!

Now that's a hot, erotic well written story.. Great job

But they sure help out readers!

But generally a good story. Seems a little rushed - like maybe they shouldn't've hooked up until the next show.

This was a great story. I would appreciate the use of proper English punctuation, however... but the material is really hot and filled with true lust.

Reading at such stories makes me wish I was a woman :) Congratulations and keep the good work!