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I've been waiting fr this one
I am loving this piece of work.
The authour is doing a wonderful job with the conflicts and emotions of the main character. She's a deep and highly conflicted woman that I find fascinating.
Well done.
AWESOME!!!!!!
Awesome character development!! I cannot wait for you to continue to the next chapter. This is the best quality I have read for a very long time,I would love to read more installments. You are a talented writer.
Okay; the story got better.
(Yeah, this series is an older posting and I'm "late to the party".)
This story is turning into a very good read. I'll confess to being rather unkind to the author with the first chapter, solely because of the cocaine references. [That stuff destroys marriages and ruins lives. Oh but wait, that's in the story!] However, the writing has made it a pivotal point in the overall process of healing a broken life. This is 8-star storytelling.
it keeps getting better with each chapter
and we are only half way. There is so much potential drama ahead it is fun to think about it. I hope the funeral and will reading are here soon.
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