by WFEATHER
I was going to suggest this when I saw Ch. 50 but didn't...thought maybe that would be the last of them.
Simply put, its time for them to go...no more
Although i do agree that the story has been going on for a long time.. no problem with that.. but make some sort of event happen... unexpected pregnancy i don't know ... but keep it going.
What ever you do don't stop, these stories are awesome. If they don't like it, they don't have to read it. Please keep them coming and please add another person again! Those are HOT
"There is no graceful way to describe the ungraceful act of two heated individuals hurriedly stripping each other."
Classic!
Their love is very real. What's wrong with that? Let them live a life of love, in another town no-one will know. But of course she can't become pregnant by him. So there has to be another guy to impregnate her. Will big brother allow that?
This is a contest - single stories. With your thick-skinned arrogance yo think that post 51 of a turgid tale even meets the criteria.
Go back and nurture the poison of your anti-women diatribes.