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by SGTPhoenix

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doodlesdaddoodlesdadabout 10 years ago
Grammar, man!

Work on your grammar. You wrote, in part, "my feet, which to my horror were carrying deadly looking machine guns." It's hard to imagine feet holding machine guns.

johsunjohsunover 3 years ago

Good as far as it went. Is there a sequel in the works? Hopefully with an explanation of his 'powers'.

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