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so romantic
such a cool story, so so romantic, wonderful
Beautiful!
Wow, I loved this story, so intense and the unsaid words so powerful!
Between the Lines
A romantical short story that could be a Novel. So well written that what is implied is far greater than what is said. Very Romantical more than erotic which is nice this time. WRITE MORE!
Yes! I agree! It's GREAT~
Congratulations on another story that's so
Real that it sits in the reader's
Imagination and
Paints a glorious
Picture of eroticism, and
Love that comes across not only as real and
Exciting for the characters, but for those that enjoy the work!
Eileen
Lyrical and sensual...
with an undertone of sadness. This story begs for a sequel to finalize this intense romance. Well done, Beth.
Agree with Te999
I'm hetero with a wife and 4 children who is not a fan of homosexuality, but I think this was a beautifully written story and, as te999 said, kind os a sad story about two wives who are apparently not happy with their married lives and are wildly happy with each other. Nice writing. the Ct. Yankee
WOW! One of the best love stories ever
The ONLY thing sad about it was that the husband, like so many men, had no idea about what love was. The two women took care of that and I am pretty sure he was about to be out on his own after their few days together. BTW to the prior person, Jackie did not appear to be a 'wife' and had no need of a guy. Peggy
Happy Thanksgiving!!
Beth-
Loved the story! If you can hop over to my house for Thanksgiving, I'll be sure that you get a leg this year!
Monica
Loving
I absorbed every moment like butter melting on hot toast.
soft passion
The sweet gently erotic goings on in this story was such a delight to read. Two people safe and secure in their passions ~ with their secrets intact provide a tender yet delightful read. Well Written!
What room is she in?
LOL - I would love to have a friend to meet like this. It is sad, that the husband is so clueless and that the wife doesn't try to resolved that situation (whether it's counseling or divorce). But, the first paragraph got me worked up (I love the pussy on pussy action! HOT HOT HOT!)
Kris
kac0375@gmail.com
Mmmm
More please. You built the tension wonderfully and left it hanging..... I longed for a page 2 and I hope for a chapter 02.
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