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Nice feelings
Thank you for this. The internal conflicts of two hard working, intelligent people protecting themselves, who find love in spite of themselves is always a good story. It was honest, no playing of games. Refreshing and passionate. I thoroughly enjoyed each chapter.
Very Good story!!!!
I always enjoy stories that show "real" emotion. This story has two good characters that could be people that you know. I like that in a story. Far out fiction has it place but I enjoy a good believable romance. Keep this high quality going. JD Seller
wonderful story
What a wonderful story. It brought me to tears of joy and
made me think more about what is really important in life.
Very hot also. Please write more soon.+
One of the best
stories I've read on this site. Passionate characters with true to life dramas to deal with. A truly wonderful story. Continue the fantastic work.... you are truly a talented writer.
Loved it!
Cool beginning, nice ending! Thanks!
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