All Comments on 'It Was Worth Waking Up'

Sorry, but too unbelievable.

You should do a novel of this type of story.... it would be HOT...... i ejaculated to this like 10 times already

I guess those that think the story is unbelievable haven't been out with me !!! lol

This story was hot... very hot... one of the best I've read.

To the reader who whined (anonymously) that it was 'unbelievable' I say this: These are fictional stories. Make believe. Made up. Do you not let your kids read 'Harry Potter' or fairy tales because they're 'unbelievable?'

Liked it alot...there's nothing better than an unbelievable incest story..lol

I like that she didn't watch and then watched in the back seat.

Check out my stories if you can..hope you like.

awesome, completely great!!!

unbelievable but great, someone said! now, that's great!

it's like an excellent story about some drunk guy --- in his drunken state --- relating his "fantastic" orgy with 4 blown up dolls, imagining them to be: Kirsten, Jill, Megan, and what was the fourth's name again?

of course, he made one of the puffed up dolls his SISTER, to "spice things up"!

LOL!

seriously, who reads literotica for its "believeable stories"? fantasies are just what they are ...fantasies, never reality - so lighten up, guys.

As for the story, typical male fantasy ;D

Doesnt do much for me :( but I am sure I would love it if i were a guy

Personally, I liked the story and was pleased that it was at least decently written and not seeming to have come across from an intellectually inferior author. Cro-magnon stories, for instance. Nothing over-the-top, nothing with raw shock value, but a well written fantasy none-the-less.

And to all the "anonymous" people who dislike this sort of faery tale, perhaps something from the pages of the Brothers Grimm (books, not movie) would be more to your liking.

just want to congratulate tochofgrey910 on a fine story. it wasn't overly complicated, yet it had enough plot to keep it interesting. another thing i liked was that it wasn't completeley centered around the sexual desire of the brother for the sister, or vise versa, that had been brewing for god knows how long, but that the sexual encounter was more of a spontaneous one that led to the relationship we see beginning to develop at the conclusion. the writing itself was fairly good as well. just a few typing errors that could be fixed easily.

oh, and to the guy who said it was 'unbelievable', go screw yourself, because no one else should. its fiction you moron.

congrats again to touchofgrey910.

Great writing. Execelent short form. Brought me right into the story. Thank you.

Totally awesome dude!!!

As it goes i'm going to keep this short and sweet and say this was one of the greatest, fantastic, brilliant, amazing stories i've ever read, DAMN, just having a friend and the sister would of been really hot and awesome but 3 and the sis, congrat's a truely great liter' story

DAMN, That was a hot story. I could hardly stop myself from cumming just reading about your characters, great fun!!

3 and 4 girl stories are usually so phony, but this one was at least POSSIBLE. Only way it could have been better would be to have been longer with more descriptions. And you didn't feel it was necessary to have him fuck [or worse lick] somebody's ass. PS Goood grammar and word usage, too.

good but you only get a 50 because you never finished the story it needs another chapter to tell what happens after that day does he continue to fuck his sis or any of them what happens when the parents come home does he move in with his sis you just left us hanging not a good way to keep readers

Man I loved your story, so hot fucking your sister and her 3 friends, had me stroking my hard cock and cumming everywhere. keep it up, it sure kept my cock up.

Definitely a hot story, I loved it. Was moreso the idea and the scene of it all that did it for me. Was a bit short, could've been extended to last a bit longer, seemed like it flew by pretty fast. But overall I loved how you set it up and the scene that was presented, just thankful I have a good imagination and could fill in a few of the lacking details myself. Overall, thanks for a great one, definitely glad I read it :D

More please.

easily one of the best stories ive ever read

I liked the story just fine. Have some 1/2 sisters I would LOVE to fuck. Have done my step sister once many years ago and was awesome. Make the story at least 4 or 5 pages long. I would like to see how this effects his family unit.

if only i had a sis

Yep me to if only i had,had a sister wowwwwwww teeeeeeeeeeee heheheheheheheheheh.

only a virgin would find this exciting and get off to it.

If only my sister did this...

Im having a sister born here soon. Just wait till shes 18 and ima fuck her

That was one hot ride.

This shit was solid, i know they say women are more inclined to reading porn rather than watching it but i will be dammed if any man can say they didn't get an erection at this. great read,

real good till the lessy act took over after that not my cup of tea

Having and older sister who rubs one out from her brother regularly is a dream. But surrounded by older sister and her older friends groping you and sucking your little dick with their big experienced mouths cupping and sucking on your amateur sack is on a whole another level. The size of the breasts and asses definitely helps.

I couldn’t keep up who is who. 2 stars.