A Brat and Her Master

Do write another one pls!

Enjoyable, well written and with a good mixture of physical and emotional. It's always nice when the love and passion behind such exploits are emphasised. Keep it up :)

Love it

That was amazing. I have just recently submitted to my master, although it is only through here and phone, but I feel his power always. I can relate to your submissive because i to am so damn defiant, but he is so hoping to break me of that

Hilarious!

I almost feel sorry for your poor Master... almost. I am a brat too, but so is my Master, so this was a really entertaining read. Please keep writing!

Aww

I LOVED THIS STORY!!
I kinda felt bad for her master tho, I loved how patient, and carring he was with her. Love the relationship they have. Keep up the great work.

hehehe

I loved this story, I can relate the girl, I too am very strong willed, although I crave submission.

love it

i can relate oh so much ~poor guy but we gotta keep them on their toes too ~laughs~ its great !!

i liked this because

wow lol it was a great story and i recently decide to submit to a master but i can be sooo strong willed and bratty too... hey as someone already said gotta keep em on their toes, good story keep it up. xxx

A nice, clear picture.

Loved the story! Definitely helped shed more light on BDSM to those of us (like me) who know very little about it. I'd love to see more.

Delicious! Picturing her cunt getting whipped and swollen got my cock hard.
Mike

Love it!

I really liked this one, the main character was feisty which was refreshing - why do so many fictional subs have to be so drippy??

Another Brat ;)

i love the character, she reminds me of myself, though i believe i would have dropped into submission much sooner then her