by sabb
loved it! i can't believe no one else commented on this! you have obvious talent. don't ever stop writing!
Continue with the story! You could totally make this into a novel. There is so much potential and you do have the talent.
This is hot. I love stories that start out as one guy saying no, but end up saying yes. Keep up the good work.
Thanks to you and your wonderful words. . . I now want my own personal barbarian!!! Don't stop writing!!