All Comments on 'Bride to Be'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
poorly done

not very well writen. i couldnt get off on it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
very well done

I loved it til the end. please submit more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Well done

One of my favourite stories here

Andromeda7Andromeda7almost 13 years ago

Nice story, different.

DamianShepDamianShepover 12 years ago

THe subject is nice. Good exploration of cultural contrasts.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Dissapointed

I would have liked maybe a forced blowjob but never the less a very good read

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
☆☆☆☆ ACTUALLY, A VERY WELL WRITTEN STORY

Different but very erotic nevertheless.

If her potential in-laws had given her a failing mark, she could have moved in with me (Niagara-on-the-Lake, Canada).

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BBW are the best. Desi BBW are the BESTEST.

junamjunamalmost 7 years ago
Thanks!

Nice work. Non-consensual, erotic, stimulating story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
☆☆☆☆+ [(4+) 4.45/5.0 = 89% = A] Very original! Very erotic too. The story is also funny. Last but not least, it is a non-consent fantasy.

The bride will not be lacking sex in her new family.

This story is under-appreciated by the readers.

junamjunamalmost 4 years ago

The humiliation competes with the erotic stimulation for the bride as she is toyed with. Thanks for the story.

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