Seems Mommie's got the hots for the same guy her daughter is interested in - her son. Quite an interesting read as they sort out all things - erotic. Enjoyable read.
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Anonymous11/25/06
Evar hurd of Proof reeding?
Are you an arab or just plain retarded. No wait i've got it. You're an actual inbred.
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Anonymous11/26/06
More
MORE MORE CANT WAIT
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Anonymous11/29/06
short and sweet
nice beginning, keep up the story line. please, please get spell check or a personal editor to work on your spelling and punctuation. it really distracts from the flow of the story.
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Anonymous12/24/06
english queer boy
You probably like to suck good ol English cock as well you wanker. Now go and have some pudding and suck your Dads cock while I fuck your ass queer boy.
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Anonymous01/06/07
GRAMMER!!!
Check KNOW for (NOW) you used Know many times meaning now and it really upset the flow of the story...... NOT BAD however.
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Anonymous02/27/12
bad day........
i think you should call it cheap s*&#@,read some of alwayswantedto. o yes and LEARN from a master.
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Anonymous01/13/13
please get an editor
The mis-use of synonyms and mis-spellings is very distracting.
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Anonymous04/18/14
was it on purpose?
I cant tell if you're joking or not but if you aren't... you really need to learn the difference between know, now, too, to, and two. Unless you're not natively english speaking it makes you sound 12. Otherwise good story but stopped too soon
English
Together at last!
Seems Mommie's got the hots for the same guy her daughter is interested in - her son. Quite an interesting read as they sort out all things - erotic. Enjoyable read.
Evar hurd of Proof reeding?
Are you an arab or just plain retarded. No wait i've got it. You're an actual inbred.
More
MORE MORE CANT WAIT
short and sweet
nice beginning, keep up the story line. please, please get spell check or a personal editor to work on your spelling and punctuation. it really distracts from the flow of the story.
english queer boy
You probably like to suck good ol English cock as well you wanker. Now go and have some pudding and suck your Dads cock while I fuck your ass queer boy.
GRAMMER!!!
Check KNOW for (NOW) you used Know many times meaning now and it really upset the flow of the story...... NOT BAD however.
bad day........
i think you should call it cheap s*&#@,read some of alwayswantedto. o yes and LEARN from a master.
please get an editor
The mis-use of synonyms and mis-spellings is very distracting.
was it on purpose?
I cant tell if you're joking or not but if you aren't... you really need to learn the difference between know, now, too, to, and two. Unless you're not natively english speaking it makes you sound 12. Otherwise good story but stopped too soon
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