Been waiting for this one. I wasn't disappointed. The authour has done such a good job with both the epiphanies the main character experienced. It made for an excellent read. Well done.
the funeral was everything expected. I wish she had kept his counsel and held herself in check with her father by not letting him bait her.
a very fine Rhone
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Nice
Been waiting for this one. I wasn't disappointed.
The authour has done such a good job with both the epiphanies the main character experienced. It made for an excellent read.
Well done.
nicely done,
the funeral was everything expected. I wish she had kept his counsel and held herself in check with her father by not letting him bait her.
kudos on the wine choice
a very fine Rhone
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